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666snoopy chapter 5 . 3/12 Great job! |
Guest chapter 5 . 7/8/2019 ENJOYED. EVERY. DAMN. CHAPTER! Please continue! |
Moriyasha Neko-hime chapter 5 . 4/23/2016 Very HOT. Multichapter and very HOT! |
nasyitah.ali.7 chapter 5 . 1/8/2016 genius! i haven't read such a good fanfiction in a long time! XD nice character building! love it how sasuke admits his Uchiha bastardism-ness. haha! ok, i'm in love with this sasuke! XD and naruto too, of course! i mean.. talk about the epitome of foxy-ness ;D love it! love it! love it! |
SubstantiallyInadequate chapter 5 . 11/4/2015 Alright I'm not sure if you're still active on this site but I HAD to review this beautiful piece of art. Your writing... I'm going to completely bow down to your for a spell because it seriously moves me. I love how you characterize Sasuke - it makes me drool. Some of my other favorite fanfictions use the same type of alluring, descriptive wording that would make most people slam their computers against a wall but they *always* seem to be in Naruto's POV. He's hot, Sasuke's hot, suddenly he sees how gorgeous he is, blah blah blah... I never have minded that, but after reading a few that were in Sasuke's.. Good lord, I automatically needed more. I read Altered States first and let me tell you a thing, I've read it through probably ten times and it just keeps getting better. Love, love, love the whole 'friends first' AU because if anyone could turn anyone gay, it is literally Uchiha. But this fic... Damn, do I love it. I love that Sasuke is a deviant of sorts. He was always my favorite character in the anime, not only for his detouring pride and maddening looks, but for the simple fact that he is truly an entitled asshat. Did I have a crush on an anime character before an actual human? I digress. I always wanted Sasuke to be like he is in this.. To be domineering, sexual, and always a prick. Stories that uncover what he might be thinking under that porcelain shell he calls a face are always of interest, but when those thoughts turn towards our favorite blonde and his ass in a well written manner, well, that's another ballpark. THE WAY YOU WRIIIIIIIIIIIITE. In all of yours work. Seriously, so many fics are like, "Rated M! you've been warned!" And then you finally get to it, after chapters and chapters of whatever and then it's the same generic shit. The kiss, awkward blows jobs, no lube (because they want us to automatically know they are horrible at life,) and then descriptiveness so menial you need a microscope. I praise you, dear author, for you write smut so lovely and so dirty that I have to go and read it again. |
PshhAnonymous chapter 5 . 8/30/2015 This story was so cute! |
cary99 chapter 1 . 4/1/2015 Love the chapter |
AzucenaXshadows chapter 5 . 5/8/2014 He I'm seriously at this point spamming ur inbox lol Sorry. But your story are just too good. I'm actually curious about this original story u wanna right. But any-ways look out for my reviews cause there definitly coming lol Again thank u for sharing. |
mayling.pineda.5 chapter 5 . 3/24/2014 please continue this story i really want to know if naruto and sasuke will really stay together |
valre chapter 5 . 3/12/2014 I could die happy, I really could. |
valre chapter 1 . 3/12/2014 I LOVE IT. I swear I had to bite down on my poor collar to stop from screaming. I know EXACTLY what you're talking about. Whoo. That's a very sexy part in the song *fans self* Excuse me while I finish my spaz. |
Guest chapter 5 . 3/7/2014 I've read a lot of your stories, but this one might just be my favorite. (Sasuke is so adorable! He wants to cuddle!) Anyway all your writing is amazing and I can't wait to see what stories you write next. |
R4m 0f Th3 F0r3st chapter 5 . 1/19/2014 Oooooo all kinds of sexy! It was very well written and engaging thank you! |
ClownBoi chapter 5 . 1/17/2014 Awesome story i love it! |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/13/2014 The Lying verse didn't immediately register into my mind. The realization just kinda settled in when I was suddenly singing the last part. Pretty dumb of me, I must say. |