I loooovvvveeee JK: reviews. He/she saves me sooo much time. They are a gr8 filter. They dont like nonsensical writing anymore than I do. So I usually skip what they are really critical about.

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I LOVE ITTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT! I fell like Alice Cullen jumping up and down at the edge of my seat you rock I love your story and can't evan keep it to gather waiting till Edward and Bella finally fuck!

love it so so much you are the best writer EVER!

coming at you from 2018 (almost 2019 less than a week yay!). THIS IS YOUR FIRST FANFIC EVER WOW YOU ARE AMAZING! I LOVE your story so fucking much wow your amazing!

Another story were Bella moves to Forks for her mother and not to get closer to her father. What a crappy daughter. She does not deserve Charlie. She should stay with her horrible mother and leave Charlie alone. What selfish little brat.

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which chapter does Bella get changed ?
great story so far

I have been looking for this story for quite a while. I read it a while ago and loved it. I’m sure glad I found it again because, once again, you didn’t disappoint. This is such an awesome story and so well written. Thank you for making it.

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This is great!

I gotta say I was unsure about this story for the first 10 chapters or so. I could see what you were doing, but it just didn't seem to flow that well to me. However, I'm glad I stuck it out bc I really enjoyed it! I loved how you made it your own even while integrating some of the original. I really liked how they all discovered there was more than the limited works they were living in. I can't imagine living forever without trying any and everything at least once or trying to help others with essentials that I didn't need any longer. So well done! I'm looking forward to the sequel.

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Edward sounds like a fucktard! did you not proof read AT ALL?

that part of the books and movie never made sense to me...why leave at all...seems like the cullens should have just protected Charlie and bella there...makes sense to me..

he bit her twice...but there was no mention of blood? weird right...nothing about blood or venom...or him drinking any blood...or her bleeding at all...was it not a real bite? I'm confused!

we all just love reading edwad being a pompous ass and bella getting rejected like the loser that she is