It's good and fine as a one-shot, I have a feeling that if it continues, it's going to end up angsty and unfinished haha.

I do hope that this will continue, but it is good as a one shot.

Even though it is a one-shot, it is still pretty good. Eloping, lol. Why is it that they didn't want Setsuna to know? I wonder how she would have reacted to the news... Awesome story. I look forward to reading the next chapter. :)

That was very much like reading the prolog and then having someond take the book away, in the "but... i wanted to finish." way. If you do continue I will definitely read it.

u should really continue this! this is actually pretty good!

Wow this is good! I would really like to see another chapter, I want to know more about what happens to them after they elope. Please continue if you can :D

This one has a lot of potential to be epic in many ways. Looking forward to seeing more (after SBLaO, first, please!:P). It's been bugging me though that I can't figure out where in the timeline this is supposed to be... Konoka knows magic now, obviously, so I guess after the main story ends? Since we don't really know how the main story ends, it'll be interesting to see how you fill in the unknown points, and how they'll effect things.

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People do not give Konoka enough credit. I may be a super fanboy of hers, but most people only see her trolling when it directly involves Setsuna. I applaud you putting her cleverness elsewhere.

One thing: the few times you have mentioned "straitened" or "strait", you mean "straightened" and "straight". Watch that in the future.

In such case, I see you as inspiration. Later~

I really hope you make this longer than a one-shot! It's not every day Konoka takes the lead when their relationship is threatened, I like the change of pace! Keep it up!

It's interesting to say the least. I wonder what's going to happen to them later on.

Can't wait for the next update

nt bad of a story i really liked the idea of konoka not telling anybody, anyways when do you think you could finish the second cause hardly wait

You don't disappoint. I'm pleased.

The thought of Konoka as manipulative and scheming is really interesting, and I'm really curious to see what will happen once the rest of Mahora realizes exactly how far she's willing to go for Setsuna.

Aw, this is awesome! Great job. Just one thing- you spelled straight as strait and straightened as straitened. Besides that I didnt find any mistakes. )

OMG! Awesome.

Really want to know what happens next!

Wowww . cute, is going to be a continue? I want to read moooore :D D