A meteor? Wtf?

Lelouch should have just let Kallen give him a blowjob.. why in the world would he pass that up? Just being tired is a shitty excuse and just a blowjob won't harm her...

Uhhh what? Lelouch doesn't spend hours on his hair nor does he wield a sword... nor would be become so enraged by some hair being cut...

That was pretty great!~

Wickedly cool story!

this chap and the last make me think i missed a chap in-between.

I have always loved reading your stories. Your one of the reasons I started writing myself. The story is great as usual. Keep up the good work.

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You made Lelouch a chivelrous badass who kicked both Suzaku and Cornelia to the curb and the medical knowledge you gave him only made him more epic.

two recommendations. First, I would recommend not leaving loose ends and a lot of unanswered questions when you end a story, even if you are planning a sequel. Second, i would recommend telling people what is going on when all of a sudden things happen. For example, why was Lelouch in a tank, what series of events are going on through the story, and how did Lelouch explain most of the comments that were made after the incident with Cornellia.

I'm confused about why Cornelia would start whipping Kallen, at the school no less. Cornelia is extremely capable and smart. Whipping her would do what exactly? I'd think a military mastermind would at the very least try to win Kallen to her side or at least use a more effective way to get information (threatening her family for example.)Better yet instead of taking her then follow her to find out where the headquarters of the Black Knights was.

Also, I don't get the logic of taking Kallen in front of her friends and at school. How would that humiliate Kallen? If anything it should be an embarrassment to Brittania (a Brittanian chose to fight on the side of the 11s!) Not to mention if she knew Kallen was a black knight she was potentially putting the Brittanian students in harms way. For someone who cared for the lives of her soldiers (who always have the risk of death) I just am not buying her sacrificing civilians.

when someone is talking you need to begin a new line.

so this line ""Your majesty, are you sure that the pilot will be there?" Darlton asked. Cornelia looked at him. "Are you questioning me?" she asked as she raised her eyebrow."

needs to be

"Your majesty, are you sure that the pilot will be there?" Darlton asked.

Cornelia looked at him. "Are you questioning me?" she asked as she raised her eyebrow."

does this have a sequel then?

great chapter!

i'm guessing you based shujin on uchiha itachi. what an odd twist