This is good so far. I just wish kagome wasn't acting like a lost love sick puppy.

I really loved this oneshot-y story. I love the character portrayal. I've started to more or less skim fanfictions, because they are too wordy and boring, or poorly written, but I read every word of both these chapters and loved them.

nice, keep it up

Nice

All I can say is... WOW

This was really good!

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i really would like to see how this unfolds and if she becomes happy with whats she has done. this is different i like it

This is just so damn lovely. They way you have written sess is just pure perfection. The story line in its self is wonderful. The believability of the plot makes this one of those golden fanfics. It's very easy to believe and not that surprising that at some point inuyasha leaves Kagome. You never say just how or why but you don't need to. Anyone who really knows the canon story could easily find a reason. Kagome and sessho interaction is just as it would be if Inu skipped out and sess stepdad in. I just love this to bits!

You could make it a Drabble told in little snippets instead of full stories I really like this and want to see her give in to sesshomaru

DAMN. That was HOT.

Will, if you ever consider making more...then all I have to say is that I can't wait...if not then...then I'll just wait until you do make another chapter or maybe a new story.

Awesome chapter though!

HOT

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww I love it. It's so freaking sweet. Keep up the good work.

Did you have to make it a one-shot fanfic?