| Reviews for To Make an End |
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   JJayGurl chapter 6 . 5/19 Devastatingly great story! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/20/2018 minnie's sis bellona? oooooooooooh like Minerva the Roman version of Athena and Bellona the goddess of war? wow PJO/HOO reference! |
| Hufflepuff61 chapter 1 . 10/23/2018 Fantastic story ,throughly enjoyable. |
| twistedartist chapter 6 . 7/12/2018 wow. just wow. |
| AlesiaWillows chapter 1 . 11/25/2017 I can't express in words how good this story is. In only 6 chapters you told so much and had an incredible plot twist too. Not to mention this is so close to canon it's frightening. Amazing story. |
| Cavelenare chapter 6 . 7/28/2017 i am so unbelievably depressed. lol. great story! i truly wish there was more. but i think this ending, with its open ended-ness is quite perfect. |
| Landre chapter 6 . 1/16/2017 If I needed another reason to hate Albus Dumbledore you just gave me one. Why can't he just say,'okay, harry potter is gone, let's find a different way to kill Tom, because prophecies are just rubbish' No. He has to go and ruin perfectly good lives. Sorry, if that wasn't the sentiment you meant to inspire and I also loved severus taking action and making sure everyone he loved was save. |
| initialslk chapter 6 . 6/16/2016 This was so close to canon...its very frightening because now when I watch the series...I'll see all the could have been... Just really superbly written. |
| Good Ide chapter 6 . 12/6/2015 So bittersweet! I normally hate tragedies, but yours was just so beautiful! Technically this could be canon rather than an alternate universe. |
| Good Idea chapter 4 . 12/6/2015 I love this story. This chapter was darker than the others but it contained so much emotion! Although I'm a bit sad that Sirius died, you kept him in character and ithe scene would definitely have looked bad to Severus. Speaking of that, Sev's new patrons makes sense considering he's moving on from Lily. |
| Belle of Books chapter 6 . 10/22/2015 I'm astounded and heartbroken. This story is mesmerizing and horrifying all at the same time. Amazing. Truly amazing. I almost teared up, and I am most definitely not a crier. Wow. I don't even have anything coherent to say. |
| maritinkerbell chapter 6 . 7/5/2015 I love this fic! Severus's sarcasm is so perfect here, and I love how Petunia is simultaneously sympathetic and consistent with the character we see in canon. Great job! |
| MomotsukiNezumi chapter 5 . 4/17/2015 Well, that was... horrifying. The entire first 4 and a half chapters, we get a lovely sense of growing camaraderie and contentment and understanding between Harry, Dudley, Petunia, and Severus (and Norns know I've never thought I'd ever put that in the same sentence), and it was amazing and beautiful and now... Albus freaking Dumbledore, WHY? It hurts, it hurts, it HURTS. Gods darn it all, the future has been rewritten "for the greater good" and it's just hitting me now how canonically close and horrifying that is. |
| Madame Minuit12 chapter 6 . 4/5/2015 omg wow! amazing! |
| KunoichiPoet chapter 6 . 10/26/2014 I was reading this and I was just like... "DAMN!" So THIS is what Petunia would've been like if someone had actually sat down and broke the bad news to her. Wow... just... wow... I honestly don't know what to say... But Hermione and Bill? Its so sad how Bill was like "No matter what, I'll belooking for you. In different lifetimes we'll still be together." And then in canon!Harry Potter, he married Fleur. I cried. Coz I always believed that even in different universes love would bring two soul mates together... Bill and Hermione aren't soul mates and neither are Bill and Fleur or Ron and Hermione |
