Oh-Kay? I'm greatly confused

What. The. Fuck. Just. Happened?

All the prodigies seem a little OP but I guess they have to be if they are gonna be put against ninja from naruto

Too bad for Zuko, eh? hahhaha! I thought that Juliet would end up with Zuko! But oh well, I love Itachi anyway!

This fanfic is a heck of fun to read! I love it! You're a good writer!

THough it seemed that things were rushed a bit but all in all i love it!

That's had to be the saddest excuse of a fanfic I've ever read fml it was bad pls never write shit like that again. U hav potential but that just made me wna go dry heave in a bucket 4 several hours and kill try again humor me

they had so much sex! XD

It's an interesting idea, but the first actual chapter was really confusing - didn't really follow what was happening at all. When there's that many characters at once you should use their name every single time you refer to them - it'll make much more sense. I'm not quite clear on what happened.

Also, character profiles are kind of unnecessary. The reader should discover the characters through the story. If you want to give a little background, do a beginning chapter with the character talking about themselves to another character.

Well, I'll read a couple more chapters and see. I like the story, so I hope I wasn't too harsh.

Thanks,

Nomannic

Lol! THe hidden leaf village?

Isnt that from Naruto?