I don’t know how I feel about this. Is Bella out there? Did she love him? Were they both mentally ill? He was that weird guy at work everyone avoids but I guess I thought she would save him?

Nicely done.

I'm guessing HEAs are not your thing. Well done

It was good and well written but so sad
Thank you

This is a wonderful read. Really well done with the build up, the little hints that are sprinkled along the way, then a shocker of an ending. Unpredictable and good.

Wow great story!

Holy.
Sh*t.

:( Did not expect that.
How temporarily beautiful, then painfully tragic.

Both of them suffered w/ some form of mental illness.
- I wish they could have had a happy life..
But real life happens this way sometimes.
- Sad.- great potrayal.

was totally not expecting that!

Wow. WOW.
That is all kinds of beautiful, tragic, raw...didn't see that ending coming for either of them. She just seemed so desperate to me with the nakedness and steering him into a sexual relationship...wonder what those meds were for. Unsettling to me, but an amazing story!

Oh my Gosh... This is insane! Awesome but fucking cruel! My heart still hurts :'(
-M

this was incredible. totally sucked me in, never predictable. vivid, passionate, sad.
thank you for writing,

I had a sneaking suspicion this could not end well. Wish there could have been a HEA, but you are a very talented writer! I am in awe!

I didn't like the ending not because it was tragic but because it seemed so trite and incongruous with the rest of the story. As if you couldn't think of a way to end it creatively so you just offed him.

Completely insane story. I loved it :)

Ouch.