So I know that you have not touched this story in like 6 years, but it's so good! I really hope that you come back to it at some point.

Oh my god if this happened to me I would be loosing my shite

I love this! I'd definitely like to read more of it!

This story is great - I love trying to puzzle it out. My theory is (spoilers) that Ilsa is actually Bella with schizophrenia and mpd - it's a line early on in the story where Bella is called that because she is beautiful - I figure Ilsa calls herself the same because she is ill. There are some other small things, but overall, I just wanted to tell you that you are a great writer - even with the amount of angsty stuff I like to read, your story is original and interesting. And please send me your Edward pov chapter if you're still using ff.

This. Is. Hilarious! Please write more!

Really awesome story. Love your Plot idea and your Oc.
It's great to see an Oc that's not perfect and has troubles
Wished you updated more though! when's the next update going to be?
Keep up the Awesome work
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Poor Ilsa, I can't wait to read more!

I've come to love all of your works and this is no different, can't wait till your update again

omg she has some smooth moves. This is a really good story and I love your other stories! Please keep updating!

I'm really liking your story. Its interesting.

While I do love all of your stories (hence why you are my only favored author on my list), this is vastly becoming my all time favorite of your works. I can relate to this story so freaking much it's actually making me feel like, "Oh, shit. I do do that don't I?" And you explain it with such accuracy, like you were secretly watching me from afar and taking notes on my past life.

I cleaned myself up, but man this made me realize how happy I am I forced myself to get better and how much my life was shit because of a few mistakes I made in my past.

But it is better to have gone through that kind of trauma early in my childhood instead of later when I am older, because I had the time to pick up the pieces and put myself back together while still having enough time to focus more on my future - go to school, get a job, etc. etc.

Keep up the wonderful work. You're actually reminding me to be a better person with this one :)

Next chapter. .please

You did a fantastic job with this. I sincerely hope it isn't abandoned. Your OC has a unique and fairly likable personality. Her checkered past, self-loathing, and possible insanity are a welcome departure from the canon protagonist.

I love her interactions with Edward. It's a pleasure to watch her mess with him. I'm also curious as to what exactly is going on. I would assume that the "real world" is the hallucination, but, if that were the case, how does she know about Twilight? Maybe it involves alternate dimensions or something? Either way, I hope you return to this work. It really is a gem.

Thanks for the read!

Oooh you must update! I love the sheer awesomeness and confusion of this story!

Oooh you must update! I love the sheer awesomeness and confusion of this story!