Woah. This was so hot! God damn.

You neeeeeeed to do a sequel!
I'm begging you! Please do a sequel! I'm so desperate and it is all your fault!
I love this fanfiction and Vanven is my OTP, kyaaa~ n_n

I loved this sooooo much!
This is the kind of thing I love reading!
So hot!

This pairing always makes my nosebleed. Could you make another VanVen lemon? Maybe even a Vaniku lemon (Vanitas/Riku)? Whatever you choose to do, every story you write gives a nosebleed.

Amaaazing ;w;

I don't have any words for this masterpiece of lemon. /shot

Me: DAAAMN ok is it fucked that I'm a girl and this entire thing turned me on? I Sware I was gay in a past life or something ... Well it could allso be I'm multitasking Role-playing as one of My Bi Male Jet... ironic Van's Rapeing him xD annnnyways other then Van being a tad Ooc ( I like phyco van ) Its an Amazing Story... now Korza and Kora ( Korzaax And Zakora ) have something To say

Zakora :... Sighs " Why van why ... if only I was so lucky to have you *sighs and curls up in a Ball*

Korzaax " Nice Push over You have There Vanny *SmartAssTone*

Don't think I'm wired because my Oc's Opinions are In my head .. I just like shairing more then one opinion

Amazing story!

-fangirling-

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I want more VanxVen and this story has a really really really good plot!This should be a story instead of a oneshot. Please make more!

I swear I can't stop reading this story... _

So. HOT! *-* I wish I could write like this! Absolutely beautiful and amazing!

This is the best smutty VanVen fic that I have ever read, it was simply amazing. I can't even form the right words how incredible this one-shot was and how much fun I had reading this. I love how the smut was detailed and rough; how both of them were out of control, not being to hold back the desire that they were feeling there.

I truly enjoyed it and this is exactly what I wanted to read, smutty, sexy and "mature sex" scene, hahaha. It's exactly how I pictured VanVen; the way Van would always find a way to get into Ven's ass no matter what. And despite the denial, Ven knew, he always wanted to be owned with those possessive hands like Van's.

I really really love it and I look forward to more sexy VanVen fics if you plan to write more, it was a nice work- keep up the good work.

whoa. lol. The beginning did not catch my attention, which i thought was very bland. But I did like the rest of it where they actually began grinding up on each other(or just vanitas himself, lololol) and etc. I did enjoy the descriptions of what is happening and it made the image very clear! Great job :)

I like it. Nicely written. Very sexy~

Just wow. . .

And I thought Ven was so innocent.

Niiiice! And spot on accuracy with vani! He is kinda prickish but is still kind P