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Make another part

I don't care I ship it

Reviewing again after reading all 6 chapters:

Well, this was a fun ride while it lasted but that 6th chapter was lame. Oh well, I can end it in my mind after chapter 5. I really like how they both become total sex-addicts. I can honestly see that happening with Yui, she's so oblivious that sex is probably nothing more than an awesome game to her. As for Azusa, well, if a girl discovered the pleasures sex could bring to her boy parts, then she could easily become hooked on it, especially with a girl she loves like Yui.
Lastly, some people asked why Yui didn't get pregnant with them never using condoms and Azu~nyan cumming inside constantly. I think the reason is that a futa can't get other girls pregnant, and a futa can't get pregnant herself. (Actually, futa's can't get erections either). Still, I'll let this pass, it's fan fiction after all, and we all know that anime futa's can indeed get hard. As well as have f***ing enourmous penises or really small ones. When it come to futa, there's not much middle ground...

Wow! Good work bro! :)

fucking fire bro keep it up :ok_hand: i nutted twice ristu best gril

Would be happy if Ui joins...hehe
Its quite nice as long you don't overdo the sex.

Dont let the haters get to you! This story was wonderful tho how is yui not prego?

What the hell was this? Correct me if I'm wrong, but this is some fetish story, written by some thirteen year old too. I feel like I'm not the only one thinking that's just wrong. A word of advice, wait a bit, get, I don't know, 7 years older, have the experience, THEN write about it.

Hey how comes that Yui didn't get pregnant 'cause they never used a condom and they had lots of sex
however your story was fun to read i liked it :D

Update please

It was good read all the way thru. i hope you keep writeing more storys :).

OMG!

How does a piece of shit like this get 54 likes? Girls with dicks? Really? This is MA-rated anyway. Reported.

i loved it and will support u by reading this story till u complete it and send it to some of my friends