I hoped that Jack would be changed into cybertronian and become Prime

My opinion on this one is that jack should have went to arcee's quarters and comfort her and confessed what he found out about how he feels about way I loved the story and I want to know what your favorite episode was from the show.

Please tell me the chapter after next is where jack and arcee start to fall in love with each other.

I have a feeling that these chapters are going to be like the relic race they had in the show. Anyway I'm loving the story dude.

I agree with you that this was a good idea. it's so readers know you're possibly still working on it or you're done with it and letting people know "Hey read me"

Dear "My Review Account",

So the first thing that enters your mind at my moving a story that is no longer in progress to the only other option for that tag other than "In-Progess" and clearly labeled it as incomplete in the description is that I'm trying to gt more people to read it by marking it as complete and not that I just thought "Oh this isn't in progress anymore, better not keep it marked In-Progress and to avoid confusion I'll put in huge letters that it's not complete, just not in progress" without thinking about the filter tag nobody freakin' uses?

I fixed it, because apparently it pissed you off so much that you ran screaming into my review section to insult my integrity with absolutely no basis in a way as condescending and entitled sounding as your profile page and its poorly itemized list of you acting like your better than everyone. If this is how you provide feedback and think the human mind works then no wonder you had to make a separate account for reviews.

Good day,
AC

PS: Before you claim this is attention whoring, I am simply refuting a public attack on my integrity in the same forum that attack occurred in.

"[Cancelled]"
and yet you've gone and marked it Complete so it will bypass the filter. Are you that desperate for attention?

Thank you for tying up loose end. Now I can rest easy. Bitter end for Arcee and Jack though. These two are a few convinving Transformer/human sexual tension I have ever seen. To make it worst was that Jack literally spent his time with Arcee with him grinding/pressing his crotch against her leather seat, normally at high speed.

Vfr6

It was, and I get what you mean about leaving out the kids, they practically disappeared, ah well, really liked the story, it truly was exceptional, anyways, ciao!

Thank you very much for letting us know how things would have turned out! It's a better end than most fics get. I've always appreciated what you did write, and wish you luck in your future endeavors!

For a dead fic this is a very good one. Maybe one day in the future it will be revived.

Come on please update soon

too bad this story hasn't been updated in a few years, its really good.

when will you write the next chapter?

want more!