Omg omg omg update please... I love it I love you gosh update pleaseeeeee

You are a VERY talented writer. I love everything about this. Whenever I try to write Jane, I have a hard time because one must be decently acquainted with various scientific machines, terminology, and ideas and I lack in that a lot. You clearly do not! You’re crafting such a great story that keeps me wanting to read more, and I also love that I can’t quite guess what might happen next. So... some damn good writing. Thank you for it. (:

Hi it's been awhile since you updated you have a great story going please finish your story it has a great story line.

Update?

But.
Is there going to be more ?
Please?

Oh god I almost can't do this doc anymore.

I've enjoyed the story so far. I wish you all the best with RL, perhaps you'll get to finish your fic some day. I loved your Thor. You managed to portray him as a noble and wise man that he has grown into, a true hair to the throne. Asgard and Odin, too, have acquired a deeper meaning for me: you gave Odin more facets that we had the opportunity to gleam in the movies, and the Asgardians turned to be a much more human in their vanity than expected. Jane, on the other hand, I wasn't very fond of toward the end, to be honest; the fighting, the jargon she speaks, and other details have pushed her into OOC zone firmly, and I just didn't feel the same connection with the Jane in Ch 35 as I did in Ch 1. Overall, this was a good story. Thank you for sharing your talent with us!

Well, that was a forceful sorta hi! It's still hard to imagine Jane doing these flying/yanking/jiu jitsu moves, I confess, but I'm trying. Promise.

ok, this was a bit OOC Jane for me. Throwing things around?... hn. I don't really see her do that. Anyhow. She did - you wrote it, so on to the next chapter. And no, M-rated fiction is my favorite kind when it is not a pwp. Can't wait for Thor to get better and show Odin who's the man for Jane. Yeah.

Yes Sif that is correct you are a bonehead (why is there so much boneheadedness in this story it's like every character says/thinks the word) i'm typing without commas or periods b/c I'm in a rush for the next chapter

Sif sets herself up for a queenship and a broken heart. Thor will never lover her, not like she wants him to. I can't understand how a woman like Sif accepts being the second best, or not even that.

And they still can't see or hear him?...

What a nightmare of a chapter. i so feel for Jane! Thor will have to make it up to her. Loving him is not easy. She's paying a price for her feelers for him, for sure. Poor Erik, I do hope he gets his sanity back.

This was a good place to let Jane reminisce a little about Thor and ponder her feelers. Petty of me, but I really don't want Fury to get his hands on Thor's cloak. He gave it to Jane! It's a gift!

I love how Jane is concerned with not looking like a 'bonehead in front of Thor's entire race'. Poor girl, that's a tall order, LOL!
Now, Erik, Erik... Kinda ends up saving the crew, but what will befall Jane? Oh, horror!