Awesome story!

"her fists were too dainty to knock anyone out" bruh, she fights hollows now but can't knock a normal human out with a single punch? every single hollow in existence feel insulted rn. A regular hollow is faster and stronger than Episode one Ichigo and Chad and they were incredibly strong for humans, peak physical state for fifteen year old teenagers and she can kill those hollows(Zanpakuto or not, she's fast enough to dodge them and hit them) without much trouble.

No the chapter didn't make sense, in fact, the chapter is a complete failure and contradictory to the point of where I just hope it vanishes by the time I wake up tomorrow, never to be seen again. There is no possible way or reason as to why Ulquiorra would accept the offer made by Mai, why? because Ulquiorra is hella intelligent and he knows she's just doing it to spite Sayuri and he already hates Mais existence as shown several time throughout the story. Sorry, but this time you failed HARD.

Adorbs. I do wish to see you right an OC/Grimmjow fic. You capture them all so well.

i wish she was a hollow tho that would make the ship totally canon even though it is pretty much already almost center stage

i ship it

That was adorable. I think I died.

This was a very well written OC story. Sayuri was likeable, without seeming too cookie-cutter Mary Sue perfect. While she could be childish, it feel well within the perimeters that you set up for her backstory and the situation. The plot was pretty straight forward without seeming dull, and the final encounter with the Gotei 13 was heartstopping. Also Ulqui... *calmly tries not to squeal* You did a phenomenal job of keeping his personality canon compliant, which is impressive since it's Ulquiorra and FEELINGS. lol. Awesome job!

Aweeeeeeeeeeeeeee *Gushing at the cuteness*

blue orbs

I absolutely LOVE this story and am so glad I found it! I really can't find one bad thing about it.

Response to Akira:

Her name is Sayuri Kimura. Sayuri is her first name, Kimura her last.

I apologize for the confusion. I just use her first and last name almost interchangeably.

Also, I couldn't PM you since I don't know your username, so I hope you see this.

Best,
Midnight

So is Sayuri's surname Kamiya or Kiruma? - an extremely confused reader here

Wow a bit harsh

it's not Mexican it's Spanish