I thoroughly enjoyed the story.

Funny. Somehow I found it way to fast.
Then there were dialogs I thought of being simpyl perfect.
Then there were some I thought OMG WTF NO..
Haha.
You brought up various emotions in me. Thanks for that.
Not that bad.

Dear Jehc , many thanks for your story , I loved to read so much . It's excellent. I like your stories with our favorite characters and character that have printed on them . Thank you for writing and sharing with your readers . I wish you success .
Greetings, Whispering Wind.

This is a great story so far. I see they don't plan on making it to Phoebe's birthday...

Awesome! This story was a practice in being succinct. You could have written this story with gobs of detail and easily cleared 100K words. You got all the important plot piloints and still included characterizations and character development. Nice, and thank you

Wonderful story! So glad you revived it & posted it here. Thanks for sharing.