OH good... because I had a bad feeling about this

I understand that this is hardly possible after so many years, but ... It's such a wonderful story. Percy and Zeus are starting to develop such an intriguing relationship and Zeus in your fanfic is so cool. Maybe you can continue the story? It's sad to see such an amazing fanfic abandoned.

Is it weird that when Percys dad (i ak not going to try to spell his name cause im lazy) "oh my gods" i was thinking of zeus just stopping and being like "no bitch, their my gods"

WHAT IS WRONG WITH ME!?

Update

can't wait for the next chapter.

Please continue this story TT_TT I'm begging you!

cool story

Oh my god - what? I can't - I just wish that Poseidon would love Percy and care for him like Zeus was doing now. I really want Poseidon and Percy and Zeus to all get along and for Zeus and Poseidon to both care for Percy in a really cute way but I do understand that it will take such a long time for that to happen. I really am enjoying this story so much - I am so hooked, I need more! :)

You are such a talented writer and I am so thankful that you reviewed my own story so that I could be led to your page and your talents as a writer, and your wonderful story which is so well written and showcases your writing abilities/skills which are truly great.

As I've previously mentioned many, many times before, you manage to convey so much and write the scenes so beautifully and they do not come off as forced in the slightest and I do feel as though I am there in the scene, in the room, and that is exactly what I always want to feel in a story and you've managed to create that feeling perfectly.

Saying a simple 'well done' or 'great job' really wouldn't be saying enough as to how much I enjoy your story, or how great it is and so I can only really say that it was wonderful and I am so looking forward to your next update.

:) Thank you. Have a nice day!

Oh my god! I love this chapter! I really love everything about it!
"I see, undoubtedly, that you have no respect for the boy whatsoever. 'Nothing more, nothing less?'" - Oh my god, that was awesome! Go Zeus!
I did enjoy reading the altercation between Poseidon and Zeus, and I felt as though I was watching the two argue and seeing Zeus stand up for Percy. I did not mind that there was not much Percy dialogue as I am sure that there will be more to come in future chapters.

I am enjoying watching the slow progression of Percy and Zeus' relationship, and I am curious as to why Zeus, as you put it cares for "Percy right now, this moment in time." I do hope that Zeus does not have ulterior motives for caring for Percy as I really am enjoying seeing this side and knowing that there are possibilities that they could form some sort of friendship.. I love how Zeus has suddenly become protective, in a way, and I enjoy seeing him stand up for Percy against Poseidon.

Terrific job - I cannot wait to read the next chapter although I'm reluctant to because then I will have to wait for more, but it is certainly worth the wait.

I want to thank you very much for writing such a wonderful, intriguing story and sharing it on here. I do thoroughly enjoy reading it, and I cannot wait for more.
You are a wonderful writer who manages to convey so much so effortlessly and beautifully - I think that I may have said that a few times, but I only continue to say it because it is true and your standard of writing is very high.
Keep up the great work. :)

I absolutely love that Zeus and Percy are growing closer! Thank you for writing this fic and sharing this with all of us! I feel such sorrow for Percy at what he witnessed, of his mother. I am now able to better understand why he felt as he did in your previous story.
There are so many questions yet to be answered! WHO killed Percy's mother and why ? I do hope it wasn't Zeus as I am quite enjoying that they are slowly progressing towards some sort of closeness.
Thanks for sharing, off to the next chapter.
:)

Oh my, this was such a terribly sad chapter. Well done on conveying not only Percy's emotions his father, and Zeus'. I not only felt so bad for Percy, but also for Zeus and it's all because of how you managed to convey their emotions. Again, as always, it does not feel forced. Only leaving a short review because I want to read the next one!

Thoroughly enjoyed this chapter! This was a completely new side to Zeus, and I think that my favorite part of this different side was the following,
"You're still perplexed as to why Poseidon's son is bringing out emotions in you that have not shown for over a century."
You managed to convey so much emotion so easily. Again, great work :).

This drew me in sooooo much! I cannot believe I didn't read this sooner, and I am so very happy that there are five more chapters! So well written, and I was so happy to read that this was a continuation from I'll die to save you.
I'm off to read the next chapter! I'll be sure to leave a lengthier review on chapter six!
:)

uh. Scary Poseidon! Update soon!

Wow