Why is Harry ok with Dumbledore just casually reading his mind?

Not a huge fan of the humongous focus on Ron

Good story wish it was finished

Brilliant. Both the match and the justice. Very fitting.

Wicked!

The dreaded Talk. Haha, poor Harry. The family dynamic is great. I had missed Rose, she was decidedly absent recently.

That was the best prank I have ever seen. Poor little Siri. I was laughing so hard I nearly pissed myself.

Your Longbottoms put up a much better defence than mine. Fantastic opening chapter. Also shows why you don't screw with the Marauders.

I like what you did with your version of the HP universe. I’m sorry you haven’t been able to continue to an ending.
If I pick a single point I like best it will have to be the marauders’ legacy. The originals sound like jerks that justified their actions with a thin skin of legitimacy - trying to right social wrongs. Your real genius to my mind is the marauders 2.0 going and doing it better. I like that you bring out the potential in the kids instead of leaving them floundering without guidance. The twins become more than creative bullies. Ron sees where he is going wrong and tries to improve himself. Hermione getting good advice and following it. I can see her looking past her initial narrow POV.
I think what I love in your story is the characters abilities to improve and grow. A quality I would like to see in real life where I am watching people I love repeating the same mistakes as if they don’t comprehend what they are doing to contribute to the same poor outcome. I can’t control real life but at least I can enjoy a fictional world where things are better. Sometimes.
Anyway. Thanks for leaving this up for us to stumble over and enjoy.

Those are some nice male role models. Why not just throw in the lake and hope he swims? No child should ever be treated that way. It's just like the Dursleys.

That is a perfect line that the Marauder's said. I LIKE IT!

Isn't Harry's sister two years younger than him which means she is 9? I'm not sure why she talks in such a baby voice? Unless I'm wrong on the age?

Hey. this is by far the best story I've read in terms of fan fiction.. its got great character development, amazing plotssub plots along with it being extremely plausible and well written. I've been rereading this story since you've originally published it and I enjoy it every single time. and every time I hope and pray that some day you might just go ahead with it.. really looking forward to reading the rest.. hope you able to continue soonotherwise thanks anyways for a wonderful story :D

I know that authors hate getting these reviews, but pleeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaase continue?
I get that you may have been inactive for over a year now, but still...this is already amazing and even one wrap up chapter would be appreciated.
Something unfinished is totally cool too, and you do you, but it would be awesome.
xox, auOC

this is a great story, i cant know if your still there, or writing, but i loved it! and would like to see more someday!