Wow, I love it. Everything seems to make sense and I like how you descripe him so calmly even when it's getting rough.

Oh, this is great I really, really enjoyed. It.
I wish dearly for you to continue it, because it was very fascinating.

Very nicely written and very emotion-inducing. ;) I loved this more than words could ever explain! I hope you write more Adachi/Souji in the future because you're brilliant at it. :)

immensely enjoyed this, omg

OMG Yes! LOVE IT!

Oh...damn, Shadow!Souji is hot... *wipes away blood from my nose*

Aww, Dojima, you came home too early! I wanna see the rest-

Ehem, thanks for the story! Will you make more? 8D

I'm not all that keen on the 2nd person POV, but this blew my mind!

Of course I'd thought about why there'd been no shadow, but this - it didn't even cross my mind. It's brilliant. : D

I had a lot of fun reading this short fic. Thanks!

Dear god, that was amazing. Im speechless at the sheer epic awesome that this was.

Great job. Seriously.

*gapes in love*

Wow.

I have no words for this.

Shadow!Souji kicks ass. And it fits well.

...why do I like Cabbage sex now? WHY?

Hatred, malice and chaos.

Its just oh so beautiful.

Your Persona fics are beautiful beautiful beautiful.

(I love that they were interupted at the end.)