So sweet of Molly. I know she looked at Hermione as a daughter even before Ron had those feelings.

I'm glad to see Fred's viewpoint.

I liked Poppy's viewpoint. Good job.

I like what you're doing here - revisiting several scenes from some of the minor characters like Dean. Keep it up.

Good. I'd like to think Parvati would have been good friends with Hermione if not for Lavendar.

Good.

Hi!

I really like your story, and I hope you will update soon :)

Nowadays my favorite stories are the ones, which explore canon from other characters point of view, because sometimes I forget that people other than Harry and co lived in those times as well, and it is nice to be reminded, and it is intriguing to find out, what they thought about our favorites at certain parts of the books. So this is exactly why I love this, and I congratulate you on your choice of people who examine certain moments of Ron and Hermione's relationship. I especially like Poppy and Parvati. I'd really like to see one from McGonagalls POV :) and form Bill, either when Ron first shows up at Shell cottage, or during the summer after 5th year.

I looked, but no one else pointed this out: you have two major factual errors in chapter 11 (sorry, I'm a bit of a canon nazi): Minerva and Tonks are both at St. Mungo's when this takes place so they couldn't have been there. So although I think they were in character and I liked what they added to the scene, it really bugged me the whole time and enjoyed all you've written so much that I really had to point it out. Sorry. (If you really need adults in that scene, I think Moony, or maybe Flitwick or Snape - the first because he is Luna's head of house, the last because he is an expert in the Dark arts and could know and cure Hermione's curse - are much better and realistic choices).

Apart form this, I really appreciate your good grammar, and I liked the length of the chapters: not too long, not too short.

So keep up the good work!

Love,

Szors

I love it! This is so sweet! I love the Patil twins.

I loved it, up-date soon!

Just finished reading up to Chapter 12 - sooooo funny! Harry up to his usual tricks of getting in Ron's way... Can't wait for the next update!

I enjoyed this chapter, though I don't think it's as good as the others to be honest. It just felt a bit rushed... I'm still really enjoying this story though! :)

Here's an idea, maybe you could have a Potions class and Snape could mentally watch and sneer at Ron and Hermione as they aruge. IT could even be the one where he reads out that article by Rita and notes how furious Ron looks.

Anyway, this is a great series, I love Ron and Hermione as a pairing and it's great to see all these little insights people have of them.

Yeah, an update. Enjoyed it very much. At first I thought you had jumped to the Final Battle. Very glad you hadn't. Liked how you dealt with the battle and the Ministry. Can't wait for the next update. Crossed fingers, hope it's soon.

I always feel bad for poppy. I mean everyone goes to jer when they are half dead. And some

Very heart breaking things occur in tbe hospital wing that she has to witness.

Nice update!