| Reviews for Book One: Pain is Bitter |
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ceekatz chapter 2 . 9/21/2017 the bathroom scene was fine |
Guest chapter 18 . 4/30/2017 very good story but to short need more storys with Hermione and draco in them |
Blunt chapter 1 . 8/8/2015 Clearly you are not writer material. This is written really bad. |
M chapter 5 . 7/27/2014 I squealed like the girl I am when Hermione kissed Draco. |
veronicacece chapter 4 . 3/29/2014 AW YES! SHES UP, SHES UP, BISCHES TAKE THAT BOOM GOES THE DYNAMITE BOOM I SAID! But really, I was close to CRYING Calypso! I wish she and Draco would get together like THAT! I wonder what's to come?! AND STEPHEN NOOOO HE CAN'T DIE TOO THIS STORY IS AN EMOTIONAL ROLLER COASTER CALYPSO AND I LOVE IT 333333 VJ xoxoxoxoxox |
r1sh1ma1 chapter 18 . 10/13/2012 love ur story waiting for sequel omg |
Guest chapter 17 . 7/22/2012 This story has such a good plot but wow it's so terribly written! It's jumpy and makes almost no sense. Also the characters are nothing like they should be. You have them totally OC, a little is fine but wow... |
rolljordanroll chapter 3 . 9/21/2011 In chapter 2 Draco was so bipolar one minute he was nice to Hermione and the next he was calling her a mudblood. What's w/ him? |
EmoPrincess21 chapter 18 . 1/31/2011 love it |
CyraAideen chapter 18 . 8/29/2010 That was... that was... wow!That was amazing! And so dark! |
maryann00 chapter 9 . 4/12/2010 Great Story! |
Lily'sBookstore chapter 18 . 1/31/2010 God, must be one of the best stories I've ever read! You got a way with words...It's simply great. You cold really try to develop this kind of things, you can sure make people notice the complexity of human personality and mind, people in this story show it, opposed to other fics where the charecters barly have a personility, and this little thing being one-sided and shallow. |
ZeeZee The Dreamer chapter 2 . 1/9/2010 Hi this chapter didn't suck, believe me, Hermione's traits when she was harming was quite true to a real harmer. Well done on crafting this, I'm intrigued to how well this will go :) x |
scarredprincess chapter 12 . 12/10/2009 Aww i love it cant wait to read more love Scarred Princess |
JaneA0202 chapter 4 . 10/16/2009 just reading this story...but Im very confused...in first chapter he is so cruel to her and then suddenly he likes her, even loves her...he did love her before that suicide or it just suddenly happened? I wouldnt want to be friends with someone who told those cruel things to me like Draco. If you can, explain it please, I didnt get it (,,blush,,) Jane |