OMG this is so cute and I realized that Chloe and I have a smiliar mentality. Does this mean that I have the maturity of a teen? I hope not! Brilliant, as always. *goes to Twitter to tweet you praises*

OMG okay. Girl I was totally going to wait to review until I read every chapter, but,

1.) You spelled chiuaha wrong (and I think I did too) and

2.) OMG, THERE ARE SO MANY PARALLELS TO FORBIDDEN THAT I CAN'T EVEN STAND IT AND

3.) We must think a like because I thought to myself, of only Simon could have been there to say, "Get it in, bro!" and instead he cat calls lmfao!

and

4.) I am most def. reading every story you've written thus far. I am such a huge fan (I even follow you on Twitter)

Omg this is such a great fanfiction I absolutely love it! Keep up the good work:))

Easily a favorite. Written well, good plot, canon kept!

I'm gonna keep it short and simple since you've probably heard it all. It was Awesome. Hope to read more of ur work...

This may sound a little, creepy, but this is literally my favorite fanfiction of all time, i literally read it several times a month, you are such an amazing writer and thank you for this gem of a fanfiction, Kelly is proud cx
LK u

Ahh! That's so cute! Nice story you have hear, Eletha. I like it a lot. I think that tyou did a GREAT job on this. Definitely something I would like to read again and again. So, congrats on a fantastic job well done and I'll go see what else you have...

Loved it! Well written and the story was so captivating! I love the Darkest Powers series and this is one of my favorite fanfics! Thanks for going through with it too, a lot of fanfic writers leave the stories unfinished and don't think of how it might affect the reader. Keep writing because you are definitely good at it! All the best to you!

That was saddening, exhilerating, adorable, frightning and beautiful all at the same time. LOVED IT!

ugh I love this story so much, sorry to be a creep but it is the best fanfic I have ever read.

I love it so much ughgh so amazing!

I'm sure you're getting tired of reviews from me by now, but there's still gonna be alot more to come. I just love this story so much, it like, speaks to my soul and I know that may sound goofy but I could just read this story for forever. Thanks babe for making this story
Lexxie

I love this story so much, I had to come back and read it for a third time.

Loved it! This is a great story!

do not stop ever with this fic it is so cool i almost love this better than the real book so please write more and soon because i want to see what happens when they start school and i would put a part in there were her aunt Loren finds out they are dateing and a part were Derek and Liam get in a fight and Derek gets hurt really badly that would be really cool so please and thank you.