Ok I love this so much. The scenes when they were breaking in made me so tense and nervous I had to stop and just marvel and how well it was written. I was squealing at every kiss, cringing at Sherlock at pretty much everything, and this fic just happened to be the right amount of funny and nerve wracking and it was all around awesome!

Good job. I really felt John's struggle.

Fun read! Thank you.

"No means no!" I died XD

this is amazing. loved it

great story

Andddd I finished reading it. Amazing story. Kept me hooked throughout. Thank you for sharing your work with us.

Ahhhh I remember reading this AGES ago and with my ever increasing Johnlock craze over the years and with the airing of series 4, this fic suddenly popped into my mind again. Imagine the troubles I went through to find it again, especially since I didn't remembering its name! Totally worth it. I love your portrayal of John and Sherlock and there are some moments where I get reminded of Johnlock from "The First and the Last" trilogy by Phyona (an all time favourite of mine).

Can't wait to dive into this story again and binge read it within a day. Thanks for sharing your work with us!

I don feel like signing in. But now I have an image of John Watson as Bilbo Baggins. XD

Excellent story. I love that John is genuinely hacked off at Sherlock over this, that he doesn't just fall for him suddenly. I also love the references to various pop culture and cult classics that litter this piece - your final Dr Who reference was glorious. :). I also loved the interview with Freeman you included - it's a wonderful acknowledgement of the way Sherlock is written. As for if he 'ships it...I would too, if I were Watson to Cumberbatch's Sherlock! :) well done piece - thank you for a fantastic read.

Wonderful and highly entertaining story, thank you for sharing it with us.

OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! (Stomach hurts, stomach hurts) GOD! Please, don’t ever stop writing! I just read this in almost one night, and it couldn’t be better. I know that you write when it’s hard in your life (and I wish you the best), BUT PLEASE DON’T EVER STOP WRITING! You just have SOOOOOOOO much talent. Don’t waste it, cause I really love you (yep, I’ve just fall in love by the power of writing). Continue to express yourself… I don’t know what to add, it just seems that words are not powerful enough to express what I’m feeling right now…

When I say ROFLMAO I mean literally. The occasion was the blasted Hobbit references OMG LOL! I have not laughed so hard all day!
so, you promised to love me forever, yes? Maybe read my stories? None of them are for this fandom...nor even the Hobbit, sadly. I read more than I write my stories down.

I couldn't read it after the 6 chapter so i skiped to see Jons reaction to why Serlock seduced him. The coments said that this story was realistic. Wrlong it complitly the oposite. Jonh it occ .He is like a doormat in this story. Even when he found out about the experiment he was angry for 1min. and after Serlock said a copule of sweet words he laughed and forgived him realy?! Let's not mention Serlock behavion with the servant Jonh and his justfication was : "oh it aright he still like his ex". I am not flaming ur story just saying my opinion.

Awesome story. Read it all in one go and i was really sad when it ended. You captured the characters perfectly and maintained the essence of their personality throughout. Loved it :) you are an awesome writer!