| Reviews for Let's go dump em in the lake! |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 1/3/2018 The afrodite pfv did it for me hahaahahahahhahahahaahah |
 Violetta Dawn chapter 1 . 10/19/2016 Lmao! LOL! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/11/2014 that was a very weird story |
| ARKOS.THEREFORE I WIN chapter 1 . 5/13/2014 Hahahahahahahaha. *recovers from laughing fit*. Ah, whew. The skeleton Squad of awesomeness, that's wonderful. I laughed so hard. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/3/2013 hahahahahahahahaahahahahjahahahahahahahjahahahahah ahahahahah! |
| judah.worden1 chapter 1 . 3/2/2013 please please please make more chapter's i love them thalia and nico should visit the underworld |
| NeonGreenLolipop chapter 1 . 11/24/2012 OMG I luv the skeleton scene... It's hilarious! I laughed out loud and had to explain to mom why! Have a cookie! (::)(::)(::) |
| kaykay901 chapter 1 . 8/31/2012 awesome |
| Eva3131 chapter 1 . 8/3/2012 I am smiling from ear to ear that how much I liked it |
| Cato Jackov chapter 1 . 7/18/2012 awwww! I loooooooooovvvvvvvvvvveeeee this! Is adorable! 3 More chappies please! |
| AnnabethMartinez chapter 1 . 7/3/2012 lol travis and conor r so stupid lol :) |
| Dancing in the Minefield chapter 1 . 11/23/2011 Well... I'm reviewing, but I don't really want another chapter... Grammar and spelling are marginally acceptable. That's really the best compliment I can come up with. OOC: It is fanfiction, but changing the personalities until the characters are just alter egos or people that share the same name is pushing it waaay too far. It's almost an insult to the author and the books. POV switches: Too many. Try to have a couple paragraphs at the very least for each view before switching to another one. A lot of yours don't make sense, either, so they're more like space-wasters rather than useful things to know. Background: Too little. It's like they're just sitting there, and out of the blue this stuff is dumped on us (the readers). What happened to Thalia and the Hunt? Why are Percy and Annabeth there? Why are the Stoll brothers there, for that matter? Why aren't Zeus and Hades throwing godly temper tantrums at the announcement of Thalico? I could go on and on (and on) about things you can improve, but these are the main ones, so I'll leave it at that. |
| anakins11 chapter 1 . 5/10/2011 you cant switch povs too much the reader gets confused. this isnt a flame Im just giving advice. |
| redlox2 chapter 1 . 5/8/2011 Oh yeah more chapter PLEASE! |
| fdfjdjlf chapter 1 . 5/8/2011 CC time: -Needs more description -OOC; Thalia and Nico aren't that romantic, REALLY lovey-dovey type. It should be kind of subtle. -The POV shouldn't change so often or quickly. -This should be longer. Good luck |
