I feel like if this story was written for any other characters I would be dissatisfied and yet I felt like this was an expected/ unexpected ending and refreshing from the usual “and they lived happily ever after.” overall a great story!

Very good realistic story. I kind of want to find a story now where Rapunzel is locked in a cage and a nation uses her power to take over the world. It would work too as long as they didn’t let their army get trapped without a way to retreat. (And no one assassinated Punzie)

How she determined the meaning of necromancer was hilarious.

Such a sad ending, but it makes sense. He won’t change and he was awful to her, he only began to like the idea of her after he realized she was the princess. He was only thinking of what he could get out of it. I’m so sad though. I prefer happy ever after fics for a reason lol

That was so depressing omg. I am so depressed now. Why did I read that? But it was so good but whaaha

oh that was a good ending!
great story

What an odd story. Very well written and extremely disturbing and I will probably have a very realistic nightmare as I go to sleep now because it's 3am and I have a test tomorrow. But I couldn't stop reading. A captivating, horrifying story. I think I liked it.

I feel very conflicted! This was just a wild journey from start to finish. I was trying to stay optimistic when Flynn was hung cuz hey! there was still four chapters left but tears were still shed. I feel like this is a bittersweet ending but it's better than the alternative none the less and I love the story regardless!

Hah! In your face, Flynn Rider! Ok, I feared it would be worse, because I'm not a fan of really dark stories, but that one was more like... darkish. In my opinion, a wonderful happy end. This Flynn and this Rapunzel don't fit together. I really much like her confidence and her backbone. And well, it's good for him as well. He doesn't get to be prince of Corona, but he doesn't die either, and can spend the rest of his live with manipulating people and stealing. The king and the queen are awesome, full of warmth and strength. Probably Gothel has died without Rapunzel? Or is she still there, roaming the woods? Great Story! ~ leo

Ok.. I like the story, and Rapunzel is awesome with her quick acceptance of everything (Killing. Fighting. Seducing- she's pretty good at that). But. I can't stand Flynn. I guess that's the purpose in the whole thing, but he is such an self-centered chauvinistic arse! I mean, I usually don't like people whose main goal in life is to be seen cool over everything else. There is no substance in the character. In Flynn's case, his good heart and twisted honour outweighs the part with being a macho. Not in this Story, however. I mean it's intriguing, but I hope she kicks his arse, because she is definitely too nice for him. yay... I hope you read this sometime... it's been YEARS since publishing...

Please continue this! It was so amazing and I know Flynn is a dick, but they have to end up together!

Oh.

Jesus Christ.

Oh my God. Dark indeed.

I love Rupunzel's personality here!

I love it but the ending hurt my heart like Nooo even tho fin a jerk they need to be togetther