| Reviews for The Heart of The Mafia |
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MCBill99 chapter 10 . 7/13 Why do you have Edward switching back and forth between calla Bella his wife and his fiancée? |
MCBill99 chapter 10 . 7/13 I can’t help but winder if Charlotte is up to no good. |
Appleson23 chapter 1 . 7/10 Just finished the chapter can’t wait for more |
Kenyatta.harmon16 chapter 1 . 7/10 LOVE THIS |
Guest chapter 40 . 7/10 IGNORE THAT STUPID GUEST REVIEWER GOD COULD THEY BE ANY MORE RUDE |
Guest chapter 41 . 7/10 PLEASE FINISH THIS IS AWESOME |
detsinbaby chapter 41 . 5/30 Please finish. |
Guest chapter 41 . 5/4 Love love love this! You are amazing. |
Guest chapter 41 . 2/26 I see the freakin grammar police is at it again. Just enjoy the story like everyone else and shut the hell up about the spelling not being perfect. Trying to make yourself look smart by pointing out others mistakes only make you look petty and small. Grow up. |
Frankie09 chapter 41 . 2/14 at the endbut overall intense story- Kept me reading |
Guest chapter 38 . 12/21/2019 "You're penthouse" Geez. "You are penthouse"? Seriously? |
Guest chapter 35 . 12/21/2019 Bones were BREAKING, not BRAKING. ("Braking" is what a car does when it slows.) |
Guest chapter 33 . 12/21/2019 The drug is HEROIN. A female hero is a HEROINE. LOL |
Guest chapter 33 . 12/20/2019 "being dotted on like the baby he was" Egad! It's DOTED ON. |
Guest chapter 32 . 12/20/2019 Uh, it's a "battle SCAR," not a "battle SCARE." Proofread much? |