While I like the overall storyline, I think you went a little overboard with Rose's behavior. As immature or rebellious Rose was, I highly doubt she would have written those names on the name tags.

God damn it how is he supposed to broke your damn heart you idiot if you were the one that end the relationship for your own insecurities...argggg

Disgusting. Dimitri is a fuckboy. I dropped this and couldn't stand his unfaithfulness. He doesn't deserve a loyal woman. Do you think that kind of fuckboy deserved a loyal woman? What he deserves is a whore, a slut, a woman who doesn't love. I lost the number of times he disrespects Rose here and fuck with every human with boobs and pussy and bring them to his home. People who got angry at Rose for cheating as if Dimitri is such a holy one-woman man. Jesus Christ, save their dumb souls. Dimitri also fucked around while with Rose. He fucked around way too much than Rose as you can see. Jeez. If the man fucks around even for like a million times it's very very very forgivable and acceptable but then if the woman fucks around even just one time it's very very very unforgivable and unacceptable. The stupid double standards. Y'all dumb.

Sorry to hear that you were sick on your birthday. It's always a disappointment when you don't get to enjoy your special day. Thanks for finally bringing Rose and Dimitri together! I love the way you made it so loving.

So I had to force myself to update. From the tie I've been reading, I've been smiling like a fool. I felt like I was in the story. OMG excitement, sexy, upsetting, and unbelievable. I'm reading like Rose you better not change into a freak-em dress to show up opal or when she got shot. I been gripping my phone from start till now can't wait to finish this. So excited great reeeeeaaaaaddddd!

Lissa and Christian? Sydney and Adrian? Not there? That doesn't feel right.

But this was a pretty good story.

Awwwww, so glad Dimitri is okay and Rose is doing well! Hate that Ivan died, I really liked his character. Too bad Abe was an ass. Good story.

Ohhh, how sad.

Love his birthday present, very fun for him.

Rose cheated on Dimitri? Wow, I don't think I could forgive that..

This chapter made me laugh and laugh. I can just see Ivan and Darius walking in on them. Wow!

I thought one of Rose's assignments for cleaning was the master suite, why hasn't she been in there before now? In ch 4 Opal told her Monday was the day for laundry in room 22, that's Dimitri's room. Didn't she go in his room to gather his laundry? How'd she get his sheets and linens done if she hadn't gone in there?

This Rose is just mean and immature. I hope she gets over this sort of behavior soon.

Wow! So Lissa has a lot of family, I like that a lot, Christian and Adrian are friends-I hope that doesn't mean that Christian is a jerk too, Andre and Rose are friends with benefits-that's a new one, and Rose works for Stan.

I'm liking this story so far.

I've read this story a few times and love it just as much as the first time. amazing job