Chad happens to be gay? Just because of his hair color ..

You know, I'm really, *really* liking your OC, she seems a very balanced character with her share of problems, and I really like where this story is headed; I know it is complete, but just thought I'd leave that here, since great OCs are hard to find, but nearly always worth it.

Holy shit. This is your first fanfic? If I hadn't seen your webpage, I would have never believed you. Seriously.

This fanfic is absolutely brilliant! I mean, the storyline is engaging and thrilling, and literally, made me jump up and down in excitement or nerves chanting, "Oh my god, oh my god, oh my god...".

Look, I'll be honest. Normally, I don't really like fanfics with another major main character that's not in the series. I kinda like all the attention between Sam and Dean, and their brotherly bond. I know, totally geeky. But this? I loved it. And I loved Azlin too. She's just so... Amazing. I'm kinda jealous of her musical talent.

I loved how how conveyed Sam and Dean. It was just so... Them. And the angst and limp Sam? Loved every second of it. This story is something that keeps you on the edge of you're seat. A white-knuckled-roller-coaster ride.

I think you're absolutely brilliant. And a fantastic writer. You seem like a experienced writer, too. Instead of this being you're first fanfic. I know I already said it, but I still can't believe it.

Anyway, I really, really, really hope you write another story. I kinda hope you'll do another Limp Sam one... Just thinking about it makes me excited.

Well, gotta go.

Baba.

Absolutely loved-loved-loved this story. :)

Loved this story from beginning to end.

This is a wonderful story. I loved that you gave Sam a happy ending. He deserves it. I hope you do a sequel to this story someday. I would like to see what is happening in Sam and Azlin's life several years down the road.

Beautiful.

That's all I can say.

:-D

I really love this story, and it's nice to read something with a good ending. I don't mind the lack of realism here and there, it's nice to imagine things like in your story are possible. And I'm also glad that this time Sam gets the girl. It's a bit of a pity that you end your story with a summary of the events that followed, I'd have loved to read these things as they happened... :)

I usually don't go for the love stories, but this one was really good! Yes, I cried like a little girl! Loved the ending and how you blended the the tv series events with your own. Excellent work and I hope that you do more!

Hi Liz. Your story is marvelous. I only discovered fan fiction for SPN a while ago, so I have a marvelous backlog of reading. I only read completed ... which I see you understand. I'll try to pick up my responsibilty as a reader/supporter.

I really like both Sam and Dean, and Jared and Jensen. But I am partial to the wounded Sam stories - Jeese I feel guilty writing that, but he's a fictional character. Azlin was a great addition, and I usually don't like the "new" character threads. I also LOVE longer stories - the under 5000 words just feel like cotten candy (are you American? Do you know what spun suger candy is like?).

Anyway, the review is you are wonderful, I was captivated for hours, I spoted no typos (rare, not that it matters) and I hope you write more.

Sincerely

Maggie Pfeffer, Ojai California,

What a good ending, Liz! :D I'm so glad to read a story where Sam is not forced to give up something he loves in order to be loyal to the 'family business'. I'm also glad to read of a character that's more realistic in her approach to Sam's life and occupation. Azlin is a solid individual, not a make-believe skin that the writer simply inserts herself into to fulfill some sort of wish factor. And I think that's what made this story so good. -

I really look forward to your next story.

Speaking for Azlin, that has got to be one of the most beautiful resuscitations anyone's encountered. I LOVED how Sam came to her! Like Snow White, frozen in the state of grief, Azlin was brought to life... and damn, if that wasn't wonderful to read! Who needs smut or porn when a reader finds something like that! The smell, the touch, the movement... intoxicating like her wine. you've written one of the most beautiful romantic scenes I've encountered, Liz. I don't know how easy or difficult it was for you to write it, but I'm very glad to feel captivated by Sam's touch.

Mmmm!

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This is truly a great ending for Sam. I think he deserved to have some happiness in his life for once.

I definitely think a sequel is in order. I mean, there's so many places you could take the story from here. I have a few ideas of where this could go, nothing concrete, just some things to toss around.

Anyway, really amazing job overall. Beautifully written. I'm really glad I stumbled upon this fic! :)

~phantomphan~

-Super-ly Awesome Chapter 22-

First off: SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! A sequel to this epic story is a must :) Please please decide to do one!

Secondly: I freaking adore epiloges (when they're done right - which this was!) so this was amazing for me :)

And I really liked how Azlin had learned to accept Sam's hunting life, and how she coped with it :) That bit was awesome cause I really wanted Sam to continue hunting because he's epic at it, but then I wanted him to be with Azlin... Best of both worlds! (... And I totally just thought of Hannah Montana against my will there. Damn.)

As for suggestions... I'm a Sam girl, so I'm a sucker for some limp/hurt!Sam :) But I'll definately read whatever the sequels abaout! I love your writing style, so whatever you decide to do is cool with me :D

I've really enjoyed this story all the way through, so THANKS SO MUCH for posting such an awesome and amazing story :) *hugs virtually*

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(Oh yeah, and if you only read completed fics and are looking for some more, I've written a couple of Supernatural fics - Although they suck so much compared to yous :O Just in case you're interested, no worries if you not :) I kinda suck anyway :P)

GAH.

AWESOMENESS.

This chapter was so amazing :) Lol, I got back from my holiday, checked my email IMMEDIATLY, and nearly had a heart attack when I saw that you'd completed this :0 Lol, WOAH. So Im going to review in two parts for each of the chapters!

*cough* Ahem.

-Super-ly Awesome Chapter 21-

This was so amazing! Lol, I loved Bobby's response when he anwered the phone: "Talk. It's your nickel," That's a classic... I'm totally going to start doing that when I answer the phone :) I also really liked Erma, and the way Sam had her totally wrapped around his finger by the end of the conversation ("We'll be sure to send you an invitation to the wedding!")... Oh, Sam :)

I was three quarters of the way to a panic attack when Sam saw Azlin passed out with the Rohypnol beside her, but then she was alive :) But, awww, it was really sad when she was afraid to open her eyes because she thought that she was dreaming! But then, *laughs*, she was like 'stubble...? Its Sam!"

In a nutshell (Best expression ever!), this chapter was so perfect! Awesome job!

(Stay tuned for Part II)

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