UPDATE!

Omfg wow this story is literally great!
The way they come about to basically finding out that they both actually feel the same way about each other was perf, and then when they finally kissed! It obviously was sad how Emily walked away tho /: idk i actually really wanna see how old Naomi is and if she will return after what happened with Emily. It sounded like Naomi would bring her old self back to spite Emily or make her jealous idk i wanna see that to see how Emily would react. But thats probably not the path you'll take with this story tho. Anxious to see what happens with Jenna as well omg. Like i said this story is great! Hopefully you update soon and finish it! (-:

gah, please update soon! I need Emily to get it together for the good of all humanity (and Naomily obviously). Brilliant story.

My intention was to review for every chapter but this story just hooked me! I couldn't stop reading! And poor naomi! ALL OF THE FEELS! Beautifully written, especially the angt! And that couch scene?! I needed to fan myself afterwards ;)

Oh naomi, I totally undertsand being enthrall we by Emily's arms, I get it girl! Unf that Emily is veryyyyy easy on the eyes. I love how much of a tongue tied idiot naomi becomes in front on Emily, it's adorable.

They are both just so damn cute! I can't wait to see what has happened to Emily is the past to make her so bitter towards trusting people. Im falling head over heels for this story :)

A drunk Naomi is the cutest Naomi! And what are the odds that our favorite little fitch twin would live across the street?! ;)

Naomi and Freddie are just too cute for words! I love the idea of them being friends and starbooks?! Perfect! :D

:O This story is amazing! The chapters got smaller in the last updates, but they also got more powerful.

Can't wait for them to get their well deserved happy ending. They do deserve. :T

I really hope you update soon, yeah?
I read this in one go and I really loved it.
It's so different and I love the way you write it. Especially how slow paced you've taken Naomily. A lot of stories just throw them together quickly. And, let then yeah it gets boring after a while with those stories.
But, I like how you've done this. Quite amazing :)
Hope to see an update soon. :)

I was totally surprised to see an update for this, but overjoyed:)!

I have said it before, but it's worth repeating; this is one of the coolest stories!

I get what Emily is trying to do, but why not let Naomi in on it? Doesn't Emily realize that she may not have a Naomi to go back to when all is said and done? I mean, I hope there will be a Naomi, but nothings ever guaranteed, right?

Great chapter:) it was really good to read this story again:)

Wow! These days I reread the whole story cuz I was a bit lost when u updated! Glad u did cuz I like this story a lot!
Cannot wait for Emily to pull herself together and fight for Naomi. It looks like Naomi is the only one that does the effort!
Thanks for updating :)
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I'm soo glad you updated but Emily should better get her shit together next time.

Yea your back!

Well hello. Twister (the game obviously) was on my mind the other day, which made me think of this story. Thanks for updating. Leave us with a cliffhanger, huh? Good! I'd like to see what happens next :)