this was even better for being case-fic

I really adore this story, so great! !

I really love this story, I reread it all the time!

That was great. I'm looking forward to your next story especially after I just finished watching the series finale which was all kinds of awesome.

Very interesting story. I see you might have a sequel lined up? Keep up the great work and thanks for sharing it!

Sorry it has taken me so long before getting to this, so apologizes. I loved the ending!

Thanks for sharing such a wonderful fanfic!

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You have done a fantastic job of capturing the personalities of the characters. I could hear Walter's voice while reading your dialogue. Loved the, "Oh look, there's a squirrel!" moments that Walter has. Good stuff!

Wow. This is such a well-written story-intriguing, good plot, and you are spot-on with the characters. The story line fits in so well as a 'missing episode'-seriously! Thanks so much for writing it and sharing it.

Great story. Stayed up late so I could read the whole thing in one sitting. My boss at work tomorrow thanks you, I'm sure.

Anyway, this had just the right amount of casefic with romance mixed in and I love the idea of Olivia trying to care of a sick and reluctant to be coddled Peter.

What a lovely ending to such a great story! Thanks again - I loved it.

This was a really wonderful story. Once I began reading, I couldn't stop!

You found the perfect balance between the case, the interactions between the characters and the romantic aspect of the Peter/Olivia relationship - something few writers manage to do and you handled that amazingly.

Bravo! :)

This was a great blend of case and relationship. Walter, especially, struck the right note, quirky without verging into the caricature he so often becomes in fanfic. I also enjoyed the little details of Peter's past you slipped in.

Oh, this was FANTASTIC! I read it all in one setting, and I couldn't get enough. It was like an actual episode of Fringe, only with EXTRA awesome, as you had more room to explore. And you used that extra room wonderful, every single chracter was experly written, and the case was intersting and well thought out.

Wonderful wonderful wonderful!

Just read chapter 5, its a great story so far :)

Id just like to clear up the section where walter is working with the mass spectrometer. In order to determine molecules in a substance as complex as blood, it must be prepared properly to be able to be detected by the machine; which would take a relatively long time. Although once it is prepared should not take long at all to detect.

Fantastic chapter. Really liked the beginning part where Walter wishes he could've wiped the scientific evidence of music helping promote mental function to Bellie.

Love the dynamic between the main three in this. The father/son and P/O was great, but I especially enjoyed the Walter/Olivia because those two have the most intriguing relationship of the main three. With Olivia trusting Walter with her life despite everything.