I knew he was going to propose! This is the best proposal I have seen! The entire story was really cute!

Definitely started crying when Jazz pointe out Danny's unshed tears. /3 this was so adorable! I commend you, dear sir (or madam) for writing short yet spectacular stories. I do.
Moar angst! Everybody needs more angst!

Until next time,
YAJJ

Aww JAzz is so caring and sweet!

Can you do some more Jazz/Danny sibling bonding oneshots?

This is awesome. I just read another oneshot set in this window where Jazz knows but Danny doesn't know she does and I thought that it was really well done and there should be more. But I was sad when I realized that I didn't know of any more. Until I remembered that I'd started this weeks ago (XP) and I thought it was and then I checked and I was right and I loved it. Made me happy.

Reading stuff from you always makes me happy.

Especially when it's Danny. And Jazz. And sibling fluff. :3

This chapter definitely gave me feels. Watching Danny try and fail to cover up what he's feeling to his all-perceptive psycologist older nosy sister. And her watching him trying to make it better without spilling the beans. Which would make him fly off the handle at this point.

It was rather perfect. :)

ME. WHO MISSES YOU. (why are you gone when I want to talk to youuuuuuuuuu?)

SIBLING LOVE! I loved this. So sweet.

Loved the story and the emotion and the background with Jazz's deduction to Danny's affect on the view of others. Nicely written I fav this chapter 3

Baker

Aww, I love Jazz's unwavering support of her brother so much! Danny really needs to know that those close to him love and believe in him (even when he doesn't know that they know his secret.)

Well, the last one almost made me cry, and now this one made me grin like an idiot. XP Just so you know, I'm a big fan of fluffy. The fluffier, the better, I say! As long as it's well-done, and this, my dear girl, was most definitely well-done. ;)

I loved how you went through the three stages of Danny and Sam's relationship using the fairytale angle to sort of string them all together, and I thought their dialogue was very believable and in-character. I could totally see goofy-to-giddy Danny smiling all over the place with Sam meanwhile being all sullen and dismal and "I don't do mornings" and whatnot. Love that contrast. XP

My only two very small issues with it were that (1) I really don't think Danny fell in love with Sam at first sight, although I can just ignore that since you pulled off the scene so well, and (2) I didn't think that single utterance of the "D" word was appropriate. Don't get me wrong! I totally believe that cursing has its place in certain places in certain stories, sometimes for necessary characterization and/or strength, but in this moment, this situation, it totally didn't seem to me like something Danny would say. *shrugs*

Anyways, pickiness aside, I really did enjoy this little fic, and I thought it was really sweet in a down-to-earth, not-so-ridiculously-puffy-it-makes-you-roll-your-eyes kind of way. And I always like to see characters who fall in love when they're very young get married when they're adults, if only for the assurance that they actually beat the odds and managed to forge a lasting relationship. Nice work! :3

Oh, wow... I normally don't like fanfics where the main character of the story dies, because it's usually so poorly or arbitrarily done, but... I've gotta be honest with you... This almost made me cry. T-T

I'm just amazed at how well you wrote this! The subtle little nuances, the foreshadowing, the 'softening the blow to worsen the impact,' everything. This is a truly touching little fanfic! And, unlike so many FF authors, you keep well to the personalities and natures of the characters. This totally feels to me like the way Sam would really act if Danny were killed in a fight. My heart broke for both of them. Well done. *heart* -

oh my...*sniff* i wanna cry, my mum would look at me weird. are you and saphireswimming writing the opposite viewpoints? oh my...holy my...ok now that made no sense. sad sad fics i'm reading...this is what happens when i read a continuence of sad and angst fics...

wow, this is extremely different from saphireswimming's fic. dang...they're polar opposites. litterally (the fics) but i like this one, tho saphire's goes more about the reality of life. it's very cute. :) great job! completly in character, love it! LOL about how danny got engaged. aw, they've got a little girl! wonder if she's got ghost powers...heh heh. XD

Ahhh ~ x3 That was so FLUFFY! I loved it :D

*sob* s-s-s-soo SAD D: Oh my gosh , it made my cry! It was written amazingly! Keep it up! :D

That was so sad, it practically made me cry. ;-;

It was well-written and stuff. Nice job. (:

Awww. This was so cute. :) I loved it :D

"this week's prompt shan't be so fluffeh."

But... but... I like teh fluff...