oh wow! a very good story! loved it!

I love how you build anticipation between them and their *shared* ascension. And the idea of them working together a clandestine couple of sorts on Frieza's ship is wonderful. The sexual tension is fun to observe, as well. Great writing. Fun read.

oh my gosh that was incredible, even poetic and so romantic at the same time. I love each chapter and how seamless the progress is and their thoughts about each other. incredible!

This is soooo satisfying! I'd love to read more, like an epilogue where they finally let their walls down and celebrate in a horizontal way xD

good story, well written

Are you going to make a part 2 or more chapters because its good

Good story

It was awesome though you could have made the ending adding what happened after that. But AWESOME

Couldn't help but notice that you said this fic is completed. Maybe... Umm, can that be any more of a cliff hanger?! I really enjoyed this story and think extending it would be a great idea! I would definitely follow it! I love this perspective also, hope to read more!

Wow. This story had me 100% glued! I could not stop reading ! You are truly gifted. You developed the friendship nicely and I have to say having them be friends first, but also letting us know that they care for each other was awesome. I would LOVE to read more! Great job.

Spectacular fic you got here! It's absolutely amazing! I loved every word, from start to finish. You did a brilliant job with both povs. The pace of the story was also well done. Obviously, I'd loved if it was written that Vegeta and Bulma do get together in the end but I'm honestly very ok with the open ending here. From the last two lines, it's clear Vegeta cares and he wasn't gonna abandon her after he beats Frieza. I also really loved the idea of Vegeta and Bulma being friends first and going on adventures together. It's awesome. Perfect fanfic is perfect. Thank you so much for writing it.

MOOOOOOREEEEEE

One of the best fanfics I have ever read. Amazing job!

Greatly written, but the ending... *attempt*? Vegeta attempts to rip Frieza limb from limb or he does? Would be a satisfying read it you remove that one word. Otherwise, stellar job!

Great oneshot. Well writen and with realistic characters, with demons and hopes. Definitely entertaining and very enjoyble to read.