Omg this story is bloody amazing!

Loving this story, seriously can't wait for more

Awesome story, love it

Omg this is the best story ive read :P keep going this is going to be a master piece :D cant wait to read the whole story beginning to the end :) xxx

Hello again!

Well I'm repeating myself... but great chapter. I found a few spelling mistakes but nothing to worry about.

see you on the next chapter*

Excellent chapter! I love your choices in cars. Pretty cool XD

I wish I could have a Mustang...

cya*

Hello )**

I love your story! This isn't my first time reading it... But today I remembered this and I was wondering if you'll updated soon. Hopefully you do.

cya*

You must continue!

OhEmGee Even reading the summary is a good enough story when you read the summary you just jave to read the story. Keep udating so you can have more reviews and make this story big! It has potential, believe me, Im A Lawyer. ;)

Amazing chapter PLEASE (insert sasuke's famous glare) UPDATE! soon this one and TTGGTSV please thesse stories are ABSOLUTELY AWESOME so you MUST CONTINUE THEM

Thank you for making the next chapter. I thought this was hilarious! Please make the next chapter!

Cool story! see you on the next chapter

awwww! sasuke and sakura have the cutest relationship! love it!

i like the plot, however i think that your taking away from the idea of world heist billion dollars race ect. the reason is say that is because::

1. you've grouped the characters all"buddy buddy". the first two chapters were great absolutely awesome... then you kinda went down hill with the excessive bantering between the characters. There should be a balance, if you want to add some humor within your story. also you might want to write down your thoughts as to where you want this story to go, that way you can complete it rather than having a writers block.

2. In my perspective, it seems to me that you want to focus more on the pairings rather than develop both the characters themselves and most importantly the plot.

3. this is my opinion and you might be going somewhere with this.. but you made sakura 4 months pregnant... with twins... while racing in a world heist..errrrmmm thats quite questionable. then again you might have a legit reason and its too early for me to say something.

also, if you're trying to write a action/adventure racing story, please watch the fast and furious movies. and or any other racing movies that involve illegals ect that you have mentioned in the first two chapters. i cant stress enough how good those two chapters were.. but then once you hit the third and fourth, it got boring and uninteresting.

i hope you dont think of this as a flame merely an observation. If you want compare the first two chapters ( content wise) to the last two.. they dont flow at all.

think of my suggestions as tips and i hope to see more of this story:)

I really liked this chapter :) It was so sweet