Lovely.

Ehmagard! I regret that I hadn't read this story from your arsenal.
I know it's been a while since you retired your fanfiction pen. Perhaps you have other projects brewing.
Thank you for a story that is well written. I hope that you continue one way or the other.

Oh what a beautiful story. The end was perfect for them all and I love the fact that Bella was there for Rose like that!

Amazing!

This was brilliant. Truly loved it. Thank you for writing this for us all to read.

In this chapter you have Hope standing in her crib to get her parents attention... at 4 months the baby can just hold her head up and start making out features and focus... no way she is standing in a crib!

It little things like this that make stories go to poo poo. Do some research when writing what you don’t know.

At 4 months the baby will be sleeping, eating, pooping, peeing and need blanket time with soft toys. Schedule assumes a baby can stay up 1 hour 15 minutes before needing to sleep again. At this age, wake-time should be 1-2 hours TOPS, to avoid baby getting overtired.

I cried like a baby at this ending. What a great ending to a great story.

Im glad Seth was redeemed

Well we knew this would happen. Im sure Angela didnt waste a second.

You are such a jokester .. This was a good ending for Jacob and Seth, thanks to Billy.

Go Get him Boys.

So far i really like this Rosalie.

Angela and all the big city ppl need to realize Bella has been alone in the woods, all her life/ She will not know how to deal with any of this.

I think Billy will be a good person to have on their side. The Calls seem as if they are just backwoods roughnecks who have forgotten what it is like to have parents to guide them.

I think Edward needs a gun to protect him self. Bella and the baby from the Calls.

What the hell!