Reviews for The Punishment
humanradiohead chapter 18 . 2/22
Okay so, I just got back on a portal kick after Years away and I found your fic again, and apperently it had updated since I last read? Hot dog, I really do love the concept you have here, and it's execution is fantastic. I just wanted to say that I really enjoyed this reread, I hope that maybe one day you'll find your way back to this fic, but that either way you are well.
F chapter 18 . 1/8
Wish that you followed it

But it's been 7 years now so, not much hope of it
good one chapter 9 . 11/23/2019
very god story god level at leats very good i am at 12:54am
DeKammynation chapter 1 . 1/9/2019
Oml I am so hooked on this! I was always an individual who somebody who felt bad for Wheatley, and I thought I was the only one for the longest time! Whoever wrote this is now my new best friend, I swear to God! Whoever wrote this is a soul to
xyliastories chapter 1 . 9/28/2018
I love this so much! It’s one of my favorite Portal fanfics ever! It saddens me to see it end, so please make anotherI’m sure others would love to hear it
Stouty chapter 9 . 7/26/2018
Omg that note at the end, I'm laughing my ass off.
anon chapter 13 . 10/30/2017
Eta terangkanlah… Eta terangkanlaahhh…
Eta jiwa yang berkabut
Eta yang penuh dosa
Ampunilah… ampunilaaah…
Ampunilah zikiri dosa mas Tono
Calorine chapter 18 . 10/28/2017
Wish it would be continued but I read the last update date and began to cry XD it's a shsme, I'm true'ly invested in this story arc and wish I could see it finished... so many possibilities
Guest chapter 18 . 6/29/2017
Please I know it's been years by now that please finish this story. It's the first portal fanfiction I ever read and the characters are portrayed so well, the realationship is believable and I'm all in all really invested in the story. I have to know what happens next. you are really talented st writing have mercy on every fan who read your story and finish your masterpiece.
Guest chapter 3 . 5/23/2017
T.
Guest chapter 18 . 3/5/2017
Oh God, it's sooo goooddd! I've been reading it for a couple of days and reached the "end". I wish it would continue, I really do.
bunnykari chapter 18 . 10/16/2016
I understand after four years you may never get back to this and finish it..., but I will be here... waiting to read it...~
An angry reader chapter 17 . 9/17/2016
Call can talk, she just doesn't choose to. The developers said that in an interview.
jackass chapter 12 . 7/12/2016
AHHHHHHHH you have no idea how glad i am to see that you are still working on this when i checked your tumblr! seeing that the fic was unfinished and hadn't had any chapters added since 2012 spooked me when i started reading but it was so good i couldn't stop lmao,,,, it's the perfect combo of good plot and the cheekier stuff and the way you write from both wheatley and chell's perspective shapes their characters so DAMN well. this fic and its feels are destroying me (in a good way) anyway take your time, take it easy and no matter how long it takes for another chapter we'll be here waiting for it! good luck fam
J chapter 18 . 6/2/2016
I guess we're waiting, too.
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