You misspelled what Harry's note said. (The seven words)

I'm not really an Albus Dumbledore fan for various reasons. For one, he's too fun to bash. For another, I can't really see how he was 'the epitome of Light' as Rowling intended because he had created Harry's childhood in the whole essence of Tom.

"Squeee!" TO me? THank you. *happy dance, blush, smile!*

There was a little too much Dumbles past for what I was thinking but okay. It was amusingly realistic in mind for the reasons he went into the house of red and gold though.

"You'll ask him when you find him." That line is telling that he wont let Harry go. The only problem I see with that is that you opened up the possibility for a larger piece of fiction with that line.

I'm pleased with this and very happy. woulda reviewed earlier but I read it on my phone.

On another note, give me a challenge idea and I'll turn it into a oneshot for you. Make it either Btvs (Buffy/Angel preferrably), Firefly (love Rayne), HP (prefer not slash), or Naruto.

Writing one review instead of three since I just read it all now. I quite like this a lot. It's very interesting and probably a much more likely way of things happening in some respects. Hermione reactions to the wizarding world and the people in it, at least, at certainly more believable. The HP/HG interaction is great. I loved your chapter on Dumbledore, again because it made a much more believable and realistic representation of the facts presented in cannon. I also agree that regardless of what Rowling says about him being the epitome of good, she didn't write him that way and thus her intent has no bearing. It would be interesting seeing Harry and Hermione's lives together later in this telling(and the world in general) after you have done your other character perspective one shots.

I am a diehard Buffy fan so I caught the reference. Mwahaha. That scene with a Tara image is always slightly creepy but the 7-3-oh is always a mystery.

I am new to HHr but this I loved so much. THe writing was well thought and I liked how you sort of paused to whisper a secret under your breathe. Its a style I can understand and harmonize with, pun not intended.

So, you have Harry and Hermione down, what about a POV of the others?

Oh wow, wow! Fantastic writing I really like your style.

Wow... This is a very driven story. Strong characters, not too much detail, and an actual edge to it. I am very impressed. It makes me want to write something.

Very nice.

this was just brilliant. dark and beautiful. i absolutely love it!

Very nice. I like the gentle diverging from canon.

I hope you'll be able to post the other part soon.