i loved this chapter very much when they kissed for the fist time i was hoping that kirk would say your a good kisser mr spock even better than a woman. i could feel them kiss you must be a very good writer. i don't know if you write other stories on spock /kirk if you don't i'd like you to if i may say if they sleep together i'd like to read one of them is going to have the other's one baby

have you got chapter 14 or was this the end i hope not will you write the next chapter

i loved the chapter 13 don't split them up when kirk and spock kissed i could teast it on my lips it llike they had me in the room with them so please don't part them if you do i will hate you the same way ii hate cliff richerd and he make me sick

this might be a long one but i'v got to get it out you said i think it was kirk took his shoes he don't where shoes it's boots .you said hoilday when they use the word shhoreand kirk leave if on a ship.i don't like cadet/captain christopher he should go now he has a red shirt. and get spock and kirk back together and the word is people not peoples it's like the word sheep and not sheeps the name you used for the ailens i could not read itit like the saying it all greek to me .And i have greek /english and welish inmy blood .and the ailean iarna looks like kirk or mr spock by that i mean human or

will you make spock think twice and stay with the Enterprise and his captain we all know that they are in love with one another and you can kill of christopher now that he has a red shrit you know what happens to them don't we

i don't know what too make of this story i .m finding it hard to read as it sometimes reads like the kirk /spock of the t.o.s star trek and the chapter 10 part read like into the darkness or beyond films with the new spock /kirk BUT I'M GETTING THE FEELING THAT YOU WILL LEAVE MR SPOCK ON THE ENTERPRISE

i just whant to get to chaptr 8

get rid of chrstopher and put spock back kirk back together

sometimes ijust can't get to the next chapter to read what happens next and i'm hopping that you get rid of christopher soon

I HATE YOU FOR WHAT YOU DID TO MR SPOCK WITH KIRK SPOCK'S BEST FRIEND I ALSO KNEW WAS GOING TO WRITE THIS and i'm putting the most of the in caps as i don't like you for this i'm hopping that you will put spock/kirk back together and let spock tell dr mccoy what he saw i think that was very crule of you to make captain kirk kiss another man so split kirk and christopher up in your next
chapter and give him back to his true love mr spock before spock has a break down and trys to kill himself i hope kirk tells christopher he has to go i don't like him i might say more on this if you don't break christ opher up i hope the other reads of this story think the sme

had to readthis chapter again as i turn it of and to find it again

is jim going confast tell the truth about christopher and himself kissing

i thing that you have to many chapters in this story

have you ever heard the saying i knew you was going to say that i do all the time i'm like a real vulcani know what smeone going to say before they say it this time i knew you was going to make jim and christopher kiss and i think that's was bad of you don't do it againg if you have to let it be with jim and spock it's them who are lovers .

a few chapter's back i knew this was come up why did you let jim /chris kiss i didn't like it i hope spock find out and can the aliens of that other ship take chris away from them i think it's him doing all this