| Reviews for Naruto: The Betrayed |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 7/18 fuck you kushina and minato suck my dick |
| battles are hard chapter 6 . 7/8 battle scenes are hard, you have to put in the right words. it’s really hard, I’ve tried a couple times to make battle scenes but I fail, so I just say “After the Battle” |
| NO chapter 4 . 7/8 I DONT LIKE THIS. BIT I THINK BIRNING KONOHAA KS GREET IDEA. DO |
 Smartyul chapter 26 . 5/14 More? |
| DocRoy chapter 26 . 4/24 When you going to finish this? It’s been awhile...lol |
| Guest chapter 26 . 4/14 Nahhh useless writer |
| dudepotatos chapter 26 . 3/25 I like how even after Naruto gets resurrected he still gets shit from everybody. not only is he trying to please everyone whilst probably being fucked up in the head from all the crap he has been through, they don't even appreciate his efforts and it seems some way or another that every confrontation he has was anyone that ends in an argument somehow gets twisted around so that he would be the one to blame every time. now kiyomi left him most likely forever just because his sister is an entitled sentimental brat who expects Naruto to stand and take her hits. |
| indersingh220044 chapter 4 . 3/25 you know i do think it was wrong to kill the peaceful lady but i guess thats what happens when everyone betrays you and all you want is revenge. |
| indersingh220044 chapter 3 . 3/25 hey dosent this means naruto can practically gain the ability to use all types of kekkei genkai's or bloodlines and abilities in the shinobi world? so that means if he ever meets an actual god and he can simply copy there abilities and there knowledge? thats what i call a truely terrifying ability. if its used properly it can gain you any kind or power in the world. and naruto being albe to teach the ability to some else? even the thought of that is absolutely redicolous and unbelievable and dangerous. though i dont think anyone other then naruto should be actually able to use it because of one big draw back that you there memories too. its like shadow clones but much worse. |
| thatficguy chapter 26 . 1/28 are you continuing this |
| Guest 8 chapter 26 . 12/31/2019 Have Naruto send his former sister back so she could live the live he had but this was in another dimension of course. She’ll feel the same way as she does? |
| PinkiePieParty122894 chapter 26 . 10/27/2019 Can’t wait to read what happens next:) |
| markshandon7 chapter 3 . 10/22/2019 So you gave away the one thing that made him special. |
| god of all chapter 26 . 5/6/2019 Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon. |
| Naruto chapter 9 . 4/25/2019 I would like to have more sex |
