Gosh! I had the story on alert and couldn’t believe my eyes when I saw the update email! Thank you for finally finishing the stor. I enjoyed it thoroughly and needless to say John Barrowman singing “I know him so well” is now one of my favourites. Hope you had a good time with John in New Zealand ;)

brionyjae, how wonderful to hear from you tonight with this! You finished it! Do you know how rare that is for something you started six years ago? And such a satisfying ending, and of the same quality as the earlier acts! Just wonderful! Congratulations!

Awww. Cute and clever. Dare I say, worth the wait!

What every happened to the finally i know you said you where bad at updating but this was last updated a 2 and a half years ago
But it was a great story couldnt stop reading i loved it x

This has been a truly brilliant musical adventure - it deserves to be on the stage for everyone to enjoy! Russell T Davies has some incredibly talented rival in you.

If only there were a wonderful finale with which to close out the show, to give the patrons a reason to rise to their feet in glowing admiration and thunderous applause, all shouting 'Author! Author!'

Oh well...

Brilliant. Fricking Brilliant.

its so rubbish its good

This is absolutely hilarious! HAHAHAHAHAHAH!
If only they made a musical...XD
Very original, great job!

Gotta love this scene, Ianto and Tosh interaction. Yay! I never liked this actual scene cuz of Ianto saying Lisa instead of Jack and then Jack's annoyed/sad/disapppointed face but you've changed it and it's so much better. Wish this was how it actually happened *sigh* xxx

Love how Jack bursts in to save the day, phew that was close! Xxx

I do love a little Gwen bashing but Gwen and Ianto friendship works as well :-) xxx

I love Tosh too, I think she's amazing and I love this scene xxx

Me thinks that this is my favourite scene out of all of them. The songs are amazing and fit perfectly and I like seeing Tosh, Gwen and Owen cheering up Ianto. Owen is brilliant in this scene, it's so cute! Xxx

Love this scene even though Jack was a twat for leaving.'I wont say Im in love' song is brilliant for Ianto :-P xxx

Oh my god I LOVE this! I would definetly go see this if it was a proper stage musical. Your song writing's amazing. (assuming you wrote the song yourself) :)