Very, very sexy. They make quite a pair don't they? Hope to see more of this. Well done.

I'm not into futa, but I enjoyed this immensely. I love your writing style, the tantalizing build up, how easily you convey the roughness and intensity of every singular movement between the two, the little thoughts and feelings of each in their passions. I understand this was meant to be a sexual oneshot, but I only wish there was some emotional resolution after the intensity of the events. Something to imply it was more than just a fuck. But that's just personal taste. All in all, very well executed, super hot and satisfying. I'm actually interested in writing an alternate ending, picking up from after Morrigan almost asphyxiates Leliana. Let me know if that's okay!

Interesting story... Yes futa does seem to be a thing in the last few years. Not that I'm complaining. It's right up my alley so this good. :3

Better than 50 shades of grey. Didn't read that book, but this is a masterpiece. Good writing!

This needs way more reviews, loved the smut between Leliana and Morrigan, I'm a sucker for both :)

Wow. This was incredible. Well done and I'm glad to see you've written other fics as well. Your knack for details is wonderful.

What the fuck...

Ugh. Okay, Rule 34 and all, I get that. I'm not gonna argue with the hermaphrodite thing, some people are into some weird fucking shit, and I respect your right to be creepy, since you guys tend to respect my right to be a prick online.

All I ask is that you at least *try* to keep them in character? Please?

Great story I have to say this is the first futa story I have read with Dragon age but I have to so great job but I do have a couple quiches if you don't mind me asking like if you were planing on making a couple more chapters I think this set up would work and how was Morrigan grow her cock? All so in your story you were more playing that Leliana wasn't a virgin which I could see but I was wondering if you were thinking of playing with that a bit more sorry for all the quiches just thought I ask

And for this, you are on my list of 'most favourite people once alive in the history of forever-ness'. Though I read you're A/N warning at the beginning, I was still surprised when Morrigan was magically 'endowed', but it just worked so brilliantly in this story. I don't need to understand how/why, but I do need a cold shower now, brb... ;D

You sell yourself short (at first) by the way you sell your story. The writing was really detailed in a very fresh way with regards to the temperature of the water (it even reminded my of the forever ago when I'd crossed a stream and the aching cold that my legs and feet received from that), the clothing, the state of mind of Leliana while she's out wandering for the evening. I really liked how you kept the point of view during the oral sex from being 'she lapped...she sucked on her clit...she inserted a finger...blah, blah oral lapping...'; instead you had the receiver and her thoughts and feelings while it was going on: great!

Then - after selling us readers on the empathetic feeling of being in Leliana's head - you have it fvcked and her essentially head raped. Don't know what happens later, I'm assuming she's "into it."

This is a good place to explore kink, and you gave fair warning (I don't mind futa, that isn't what sent me off), but I'm just bummed that I couldn't enjoy your other writing talent, since you were going for the taboo shock factor or just get off on it personally.

I started reading this with a sense of apprehension after your authors note, but I shouldn't have been so silly. This worked unexpectedly well, in terms of the pairing, and was very well written. I immediately recommended it to my girlfriend. Looking forward to read more of your works.

Please hurry and update!

Still no Dragon Age Two stories huh. I'm Still looking for the Iseabela/FHawke story. Do you have one of those waiting in the wings.

Well, its been a long time coming but it was well worth the wait, I must say. I never would have thought of futa working well between them, but I think you pulled it off brilliantly.

Look forward to more of your work in the future.