OMFG! SHE IS BOMB! plz continue!

PLease update this story and finish! It has started off so good! I am looking forward to reading more from you.

Ohhh this is based of Predators! :D This is really cool and I love it so far! Your writing is great! Cant wait to see where this is going! Update!

Can't wait to read more!

Geez...Not knowing where you are, a grumpy alien dubbed 'Darwin', AND having your period...That really is a shitty day. :(

I think my favourite line had to be...-searches for it and clears throat- 'It looked like an angry woman's crotch protected by tusks'...I have not laughed that much in awhile. :) Hope there is more to come!

Wow. I gotta admit, while I found the movies okay, I never interested in finding out what the fanfiction was like. So when I found this on Graphs favorite list I was a bit skeptical. But you blew me away. I love your OC's character development and the way she keeps mouthing off to the predator even though she knows she shouldn't. The whole narrative is amazing. It's so easy to submerse myself into the story. You spin a wonderful tale. What would it take to get an update?

"Holy shit, you're people!"

I cannot tell you how much I enjoyed that moment! And when she started in on the captured bastard who abandoned her... BAHAHA, who's laughing now, bitchface?

Ahem. I have the Bambi Eyes at the ready, so update or else face their wrath! (Please?)

So I love Predators. Imagine my surprise when I hopped on over to your profile (read: stalked you for no better reason than you're pretty neat and I'm procrastinatin' somethin' fierce) and found this little gem a-waitin' for me. I love your OC's voice, just like I tend to love ALL your OCs' voices, and while the plot hasn't taken off quite yet, I still love where it's gone so far and I can't wait to see what kind of yarn you spin for us.

Now on to chapter two! And please, find it in your heart to update for me? I'll bring out my Bambi eyes if I become displeased, and my Bambi eyes are legendary. (*exudes cutesy menace*)

Awesome! I love your girl! She's way more Kickass than Isabel! I really hope you can continue this. It looks like it'll be great when its done

I think this needs to be updated lovely ;)

I do love your stories

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Don't leave us hanging, I wanna see more! Yerp. More, it is needed.

Wow! :0 actiony! More chapters! Please! Yay!

WHOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA! OMG! I LOVED IT! Lol poor girl xD and yay~! she found the pred :) I cant wait for your next chapter! This is all so interesting! I cant wait to see what you plan to do with the pred. I hope theres some action to go between the pred and her xD love the way you made her and pred interact, the way that they treat each other. everythings so realistic, i can picture it perfectly in my mind lol great chappy cant wait for the next one!

Nice. Narrative. Should have used male human protagonist cause that's never been done before

I love how you write the action sequences and the way you sprinkle humor into the grimness of the situation is great. I like the pred's nickname too, "Darwin". So fitting! *lol* Can't wait for the next chapter; kudos!