Really sweet and cute, great job! Glad that Roxas was there for him.

I cried while reading this... It's so beautiful you are amazing at this :-)

This had me close to tears! I love that it has a happy ending.

Some people that are abused aren't so lucky.

I think the world could learn a thing or two from this story!

Because some people don't know how to treat other human beings and it's absolutely ridiculous!

Daw!

im not ashamed to admit that this made me cry twice. still going right now lol. that was one of the sweetest yet saddest fics ive read

awww. so sweet!

Well...Okay, yeah. The grammar on this one was WAYYYYYYY worse than in your other one. I don't know if it's because it was more emotional for you or what, but you REALLY need to check your work. That being said, though, this was a really sweet, really sad story, and it was very well written, apart from the grammar/usage and spelling mistakes. I really loved the plot and storyline of this one, and...well, like I already said, it was so sweet. Oh, and that first part wasn't me trying to give a flame, it was just me being...well, being me. One way to help with your grammar/usage and spelling would be to get a beta reader. Although I occasionally get a little lazy about it, I'm a beta reader. (In saying that I'm lazy with it, I don't mean I don't do it. I mean I don't show where I changed things.) I'm probably a really good one, too, because I usually get so bored with life in general that I can beta read the stories right away. So, if you don't wanna bother looking for one, I'll beta read for you - OH! Or I can ask my beta reader, Ariisha-chan. She's really good at beta reading, too, and she's the reason my grammar is so much better - So, in short, get a beta reader, and I love this story even though it needs to be beta read - Good job, Penname-san -

awwwwwwwwwwww you made me cry :..) happy ending

That was so beautiful. :')

I'd love to stab Axel's father on his back-side with a knife and leave burn marks on his entire body[mostly skin]. *realizes I just said that* Oh my god, I have issues. O.O

That was wonderful. Those two are so sweet together. I don't have any constructive criticism :). Nice story.

That was both sad and cute. I liked it.

Absolutely touching story and so well written _

I really enjoyed reading it.

Oh my gosh, this story is SO SWEET! POOR AXEL!

sad but sweet awesome story XD

That was sooooooooooooo friggin cute. Damn you! You made me tear up a bit! Poor Axel! Atleast he has Roxy to help him, good job ;)