The fact he used mustard gas is highly disturbing, mustard gas is one of the worst ways to die. You should read up on it, it's like you're rotting, dissolving, and burning to death slowly for weeks until you die - and you don't fall unconcious. I wouldn't wish that on not even my worst enemies, and it's gruesomeness is the reason it's banned apparently.

This turned into a major crack chapter. Everything was normal, then you had Harry making tentacle monsters rape Snape? What?

Any... not censored version available?

Yeah, that's where I am going to stop. Harry was already a nobody, sad and pitiful excuse for a man. In hundreds of years he mostly focused on Quiditch - all of his true achievements were an afterthought. I call it a definition of being brain dead. I mean, instead of learning legilimency, arithmancy, runes, fucking every girl not only in Hogwarts, but in England, repeating these magical bonds, finding lost magic and places, he focuses on sport.

For once he was better than this annoying and bossy teacher's pet. I can already see his 'thought' process.

'What can I do? I have a one chance in a lifetime to be great and free. I know, I' ll bring someone who will nag, order me, tell me what's acceptable and what I am not allowed to do in MY loop. Meanwhile, I will once again become a braindead sports man, who needs to be reminded by his mistress to tie my shoe laces'.

Sounds like a great plan.

i want my time back ..animal

I loved this story. Thanks for sharing it with us.

Hello,

The website you not show up.

Can you please keep updating this story in too?

Regards.

the whole thing about ginny, luna, and hermione is getting boring.

aaaaargh

Good story except the ending, the ritual and the many '...'

Well this was a pretty good story. I liked how things progressed for the most part. However there is no working link to the completed story anywhere as far as I can tell and it would be nice to be able to finish it.

Bloody brutal. Hey happy~ ! What was missed? Hm...

Rather rather! We believe in you! You can totally get this!.X3

Hmmmmm. *looks at the amount of chapters* Sure, Harry. XD

nice story and you're evil for censoring the scenes and the link is dead so can you tell us where we can find the uncensored version