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Let's see why this one...
Because you hardly started for one.
Second because I really want to see how you write the development of Lilly and James' relationship.
Thrid I really hope you are that person that can give James the character depth Rowling set up for him (instead of just a bully that somehow got the girl like a lot of people seem to do)
Fourth I really really really want to see everyone's reactions on the first chapter.

This seems really interesting so far

Great job so far keep going. Don't stop now. Good work so far.

I can't wait to see what you do with this story!I'm glad Regulus and Sirius get the chance to be brothers instead of on different sides of the battle field!I'm curious as to how this is going to effect the books!Also will you still kill Fred?Update soon!

Holy pooop. Please update this soon its so exciting!

I so excited to see what your have as can't wait! Looking forward to it.

Please, update this story :) i love reading harry potter stories and your is really interesting. I have a question. Can they read deathly hallows or Goblet of fire? Reading first book is getting really boring. Maybe they can read not everything? They should read the most important chapters :) this is my opinion.

For Axl's dream chapter two she is magic be about she having some kind of quirk that could only be explained if she was magical.

Maruders didnt knew about room of requirment if they did they would place it on map, neither did headmaster
Dum dum duuuum onlyn iluminats knows