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SOLO! don't give him a pairing till way later where we see how he interacts, his actions, and then we MIGHT pair him up, or leave him as a solo bad*ss

... You made Hermione minister for magic ? With how she acted during the story, betraying her best friend because Dumbledore promised her some books, I don't see how she could became a good leader.
That so retarded.

Apostrophes are used for contractions or possessives. They are NOT used for plurals! Manors - no apostrophe. Malfoys - no apostrophe. Potters - no apostrophe. Why do you want to put all these unnecessary apostrophes into your writing?

Have you ever learned English? Because your writing doesn't reflect it. You constantly get the words "to" and "too" confused (they have different meanings), your spelling isn't that great at times, and your grammar can be quite bad on occasion. Maybe you just need help. Try getting a friend to proofread your chapters before you upload them.

"he purchased a large new cage for Hedwig"
Why? He only needed a cage for her in the Muggle world, because they expect pet birds to be kept in cages. Wizards don't keep mail owls in cages. It's unnecessary. The owls are intelligent. All they need is a stand, food, and water.

Hmm. Was this a duel-to-the-death kind of thing so harry won't be charged with murder?

I think you need to add 'willingly and knowingly' before 'betray' otherwise being totured into telling or being given veritaserum would lead to loss of their magic.

Earlier chapters aren't terrible, but this has turned into a complete wish fulfillment fic. What a shame

Thanks for sharing this.

There's no such word as "do's". The word is DOES. If you're going to write in English at least use English words.

Great story

Neville said he wasn’t going to betray Harry’s secrets whilst simultaneously spilling exactly how much Harry knows and how much Harry trained. Top effort Longbottom, that’s an ‘F’ from me.

I know this is well after the fact for the current-ness of this story. While I usually believe that an H-Hr pairing is better than a H-GW, the way you have portrayed Hermione in this fic leads to just what was shown. This has been a very enjoyable read so far. Thank you for your efforts at entertaining us. I know I am not able to imagine a story line for myself and am very grateful to you and many of your colleague fiction writers for varying the plots of JKR's story so that the characters may live on and do something different than in JKR's books. Thank you very much.

Dumbledore is DAMNED.

How many thousands died because he tried to play god and redeem murderers instead of protecting the innocent?

It is nearly impossible to have a good Dumbledore without him being a fool as we!l.

Almost any character can be redeemed but you have to start early.
Gellert and Tom the changes have to be before they started a war.
Dumbledore's redemption can be as late as Harry's first year but is better much earlier.
Snape and Peter the chances are when they are students.