I like how this one has lots of little hints to the actual series and done in a way where you might think the 'time and space' thing did actually exist they just dont remember themselves. Also liked the twist with the letter at the end between Rose and Doctor. Very good.

That was an evil ending. Although, since this was slightly pareleling Casalblanca, it's better Rose going off with the Master. And good on her for using that gun!

That was fantastic. Heartsbreaking as well.

What? that's it? your kidding, that was bloody good, Woman (or man, I don't judge ) Squeal, Seqaul

Mmm, I love this. A perfect blend of the noir world and Doctor Who, seeded with tiny little Whovian reference - "It's bigger on the inside" was my favourite. You're amazing. :)

Nine's running a bar called The Oncoming Storm. Man, isn't it just fantastic. And Rose! Her noir-self is just... So badass. You have Donna/Captain Jack too! Haha! And I'm literally jumping in my seat when you mentioned the fob watch. lol.

Basically, wow. Just wow. This is one of the best AU fics I've ever read, and, if you feel like it, you should absolutely continue this! I'm personally a sucker for noir movies and stories, and this is brilliant! Your fic should've gotten more reviews :D

This was amazing! You should totally continue it! I love how you paired Donna and Jack xD This is obviously AU, but how AU would it be if it continued? You added the fob watch and that makes pretty much any scenario possible, especially since the Master still had one too.