This is an awesome romantic angsty story! And I completely loved the OC pairing I hope to see them again ;)

Scorbus is my fav pairing especially after reading the Cursed Child...
overall great job!

*happily eating my earned cookie*
At first I want to say thank you. Thank you for writing the story and for sharing it with the world! Secondly, I think you did great! The scene was just perfect. not too much but not too little. Just perfect. I like that the story reflects on so many relationships! I would love to read a spin-off about Ethan! How he changes and so on! Thank you again! I liked it!

And once again is Rosie there to rescue the emotional world of Albus! She reminds me very much of Hermione. The way she guides him through his mess of relationships! Awesome!

I just finished the first scene and it was so sweet I can't even wait until I finish the chapter to tell you how amazingly awesome it was, brought tears to me eyes! "It's my lucky day, isn't it?" Best line ever!

I just heard The Scientist for the first time last week - a bit late, but I used to have an irrational hatred for Coldplay because of the inanity of Yellow - and was just waiting for an excuse to buy the album...thanks for giving me one! Listening to it seriously made that last scene SO much better! Not that it wasn't already amazing, loving this story.

Nicely done.

I like your OCs - I'm not sure whether David reminds me of anyone, but Ethan sounds remarkably similar to another character I like - look up "Mai-Hime" and check out Nao Yuuki, or "Mai Otome" and Nao Zhang - she's a redhead, but she has those precisely-colored eyes, and perhaps not exactly the same attitude (if anything, Nao is even bitchier than Ethan). There's lots of fic about MH, though obviously, nowhere near the sheer volume of HP. Anyway, just thought I'd let you know.

... ditch the song. Really. Songfic makes me break out in hives.

can I just say that when this fic ended I was sad because it was over? XD I've favorited this and also your other one. :)

Is it just me or am I the only one rooting for Al and David to get together :D I know they won't but in my head they are now together forever hehe ;)

Intriguing start :) Are you French? I wondered because you wrote "He was afraid, afraid of deceiving his parents" and I think you meant "disappointing", so I wondered if you were thinking to the French word "decevoir".

I love this fic. Very well done! :)

One of my friends went through that. It broke my heart when he told me his story just like it broke my heart to read it. Things like that do happen. Its just sad that it can't be prevented. :( I love this story so far

NAWWW it was such a great story!

So i know you probably wont read this but i just have to say i really love that you made the "bad guy", David, have a sob story and a love interest and a semi happy ending along with Ablus and Scorpius.

I started reading this... and honestly, I couldn't stop reading. Albus is so adorable and I love how he interacted with the others. Scorpius was just unf, haha. I must also admit that I got attached to David and Ethan. I was cheering for them to get together so badly!

What I'm trying to say is that I really liked it! Good job! :D