Reviews for The Child He Loved
TweakyGhostLover chapter 1 . 3/23/2017
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Amie walters chapter 4 . 11/13/2016
Keep writin it im . will freya fall in love up together?I hope so
Amie walters chapter 4 . 10/22/2016
Keep writin it I want them to fall and marry eventually
Daniella chapter 4 . 8/24/2014
Bae , Rumple and Emma run off to the forest. Rumple doesn't have the power to heal himself or have the cure on him. Emma and Bae leave Rumple to rest to get fire wood. The plan is too go to Camelot in the morning so Merlin can heal Rumple.

Then Emma and Neal are attacked by some of Hook men. Neal fires a gun in the air. Emma says to Bae what are you doing? He replies protecting you. Emma replies have you any idea what you just done. They hear a sound coming from the trees. Hook men run away shouting orgers. Emma and Bae run away but Bae trips over a rock. He tries to shoot the orger but it destroys the gun.

Emma appears and shouts Bae. Then Emma yield comes from her knocking the orger down who hits his head on a rock. Emma helps Bae up. He says you saved me. There a silence. Bae says your supposed to say It was the honourable thing to do. Emma walk away but she looks Merlin appears out of now where and sees the whole thing.
Guest chapter 4 . 8/24/2014
Meanwhile back at Bae house. Rumple tells Bae that Emma deal wasn't just to find him but get him to talk to him. So if he really cares for Emma he uphold the bargain. So Emma leaves Bae and Rumple to talk alone. Bae says you have 1 minute. Rumple says to Bae that nothing is worse then regret. Bae replies try admondment. You know for no more years then you can image every time I sleep see your hand wrapped around my letting me go. Choosing all this crap. waves his his hand. Over me. Minutes up.

Then out of no where Hook knocks Bae out and stabs Rumple with the poison from Never land.
Daniella chapter 4 . 8/23/2014
Meanwhile back at Camelot castle they realise Emma is missing and the lost boys are forced to tell Arthur , Gwen , Merlin , Red and the knight the truth. Oliver tells that back in Story broke Emma made a deal with Rumple so Cinderella can keep her baby. She owed him a favour. Which turns out to help Rumple find his son. Arthur replies we must go after her once with Hook still out there wanting to kill Emma. Oliver replies wait there more. Emma meet Bae in Never land and Neal in New York. She thinks Bae and Neal are the same person. Which makes Bae Henry father , Rumple Henry grandfather and Peter pan Henry great grandfather.

Arthur replies I thought I was Henry grandfather. Gwen replies you can have more then one. Arthur replies so Rumple is Henry grandfather , Peter pan is Henry great grandfather and Morgana is Henry Great aunt. Gwen replies and she is his adoptive mother. Arthur replies good thing we don't have thanksgiving dinner in this land or that dinner would suck.

Then Arthur , Gwen , Merlin , Red, The lost boys and the knights go after Emma.
Daniella chapter 4 . 8/23/2014
Bae and Emma leave the bar. Emma goes to see Rumple to lie to him that she lost Bae. Emma will then meet Bae by the bridge to go back to Camelot together so Bae can meet his son for the first time after 10 years. Emma finds rumple in Bae house. She also finds a dream catcher that she liked and said they should keep her and Bae from New York. She is holding it. When rumple says what is it? Emma replies nothing. Rumple replies why are you still holding it then?

Rumple says you were lying when you said you lost Bae weren't you. You two know each other. I overheard you back in the forest with the lost boys. Emma replies I don't know what you talking about. Rumple replies your lying. No one breaks deals with me. Emma replies Your dark magic doesn't work on me remember. Rumple replies I don't need magic. Then Bae burst in and says leave her alone. I know what you do to people who break deals.

Bae shouts at Rumple get out of my house. Emma says Bae. Bae replies to Emma I got this. Rumple replies Emma was right you too know each other. How do you too know each other. Bae replies I just found out I am Henry father. Which means Henry you grandson.
Daniella chapter 4 . 8/23/2014
Now back in Camelot. Rumple comes to Emma saying it is her turn to hold up her end of the bargain she owes him a favour she is going to help him find his son. She is to meet him at noon by the forest.
Emma tells the lost boys about this and ask them to cover for her and look after Henry while she is gone. As she promised Henry who knows about Neal that she would find him she will always find him. She knows Arthur would never let her go with Rumple with Hook still out there.

Emma meets Rumple in the forest and go and look for Bae. Rumple and Emma go to Bae house but see he is doing a runner when he sees Rumple. Rumple asks Emma to run after him as he cant run. Emma goes chasing after Bae. They run into each other. Bae says Emma. Emma says I was right. Once I found out about the curse. You really think I wont figure out that Balfire and Neal are the same person. Did you know who I really was the whole time? Are was some sick twisted game. Did you care about me at all? I want know. I want the truth. Shouting at him.

Bae replies all right but not here. I spent a lifetime running from that man. I am not going to let him get me. Their an Bar down there. Emma replies I am not drinking with you what ever it is tell me now. Bae replies drink better don't worry you can continue yelling at me.

There are now at a Bar. Bae says When we first meet I didn't know I found out your find Pincho back in New York. Emma replies I loved you and you let me go to prison because Pincho told you too. Bae replies I was trying to look out for you. Emma replies by letting me go to jail. Bae replies by getting you home. Emma replies are you saying us meeting wasn't a conscience. Because how the hell did that happen if it wasn't in your or your father plan. Bae replies when I was a kid I didn't remember a whole lot of my father that didn't suck. But he taught me there are no coincidence. Everything happens by design. There nothing we can do about it. It is bigger then us. Call what you want destiny , fate. Emma replies you believe in that. Bae replies maybe we meet for a reason maybe something good came out of us being together.

Emma replies Henry. Bae replies who Henry? Emma replies your son.
Daniella chapter 4 . 8/17/2014
The group go after Rumple. But on the way find one of Pan prisoners Wendy Darling. She tells them about what Pan wants with Henery. That Pan is dieing. He wants Henry to absorb the magic of Never land. So he can take Henry heart its a trade. Thought Henry believes he is saving magic. That there in the part of the island called the skull.

They go to stop Pan but is too late he has just took Henery heart. Emma talks to Pan lost boys. That she was like them once a lost girl. I never thought I could be loved. But now I have a lot of people who love me. One of Pan lost boys say can you really take us home. Emma replies I promise we are going home. He tells them were pan is.

Merlin , Arthur and Oliver go to the darkest part of the island to capture pan shadow. Emma , Gwen and morgana go after Pan. The rest of the group get the ship ready.

Merlin, Arthur and Oliver do capture pan shadow. Meanwhile Emma ,Gwen and morgana when going after Pan get tied up in a tree of regret.

Pan says see this tree its pulls on your regrets and you have lots of regrets. Morgana replies were Rumple? He replies my son nice and safe in this box. Emma says but you're younger then him. Were like you and your mother.

All that regret not believing Henry you were the savior. But then you didn't get the greatest model. You're mother amadoning you for 28 years. Morgana says are you done yet.

Pan says what about you. Morgana replies your right I should feel lots of regret I have killed and tortured innocent people and deverstated whole of Camlot with a dark curse. But I have no regrets because it could me my son. Morgana takes back Henry heart and the box.

Back on the ship Morgana and Emma put Henery heart back and it works. Henry hugs Emma and Morgana. He says he sorry he just wanted to be a hero. Arthur says there be plenty of time for that. Morgana says to Henery come on I tuck you in.

Will opens the box freeing Rumple. Emma says Mum Dad we all can go home for the first time and hugs them.

Meanwhile Pan comes back and tries to steal Henery heart. But Rumple saves him. Pan is defected.

Emma let's pan shadow go and Merlin uses his magic to trap it and fly back to Camlot. Arthur says to Emma I didn't think we could do it but all we need is a leader. Emma replies I am just glad we got Henery back.

The end.

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Daniella chapter 4 . 8/17/2014
Also Before Rumple goes of to defect Pan. He goes back to the camp. Arthur make a deal for a cure for when he gets off the island so he won't die. When Arthur asks Rumple the price? He says let's just say I am invested in your future. Every one is aware of Arthur deal.

Also before the group found Emma and the lost boys old place. The found apponded ship not Hooks. Were Emma remembers Bae taught her to sail the ship and navigate. And the lost boys.
Daniella chapter 4 . 8/16/2014
They return to the group. Arthur tells the group he can never leave the island as he had the cure as a few days ago he was shot by a posion arrow.

Meanwhile Muguse and Morgana go to find Rumple for a plan to kill pan. They get in touch with a mermaid a good one Airal. Morgana and are have history. Morgana took Airal voice for helping Gwen escape. So Airal couldn't call out Eric to wait and who she really is. Rumple says mermaids can't be trusted. Morgana says this one can we have history. Rumple says that explains the sore look on her face.

Mermaids can travel though the portals.
Rumple asks Airal to travel to Camlot and find a woman named Bella. To get them a magical box called pandro box that can trap Pan for ever. Then Morgana remembers to give Airal her voice back. Airal says why would I help you?

Morgana says If you do this I will give you this bracelet not only legs but control of them. Airal goes to Camlot and gets the box then travels back and gives it to Rumple.

Rumple goes without Morgana and Morguse to get Pan. But Pan has doubled the boxes. Pan says you never got this game. You haven't told them who I really am Son. Rumple replies no father. Pan says I never forget about you. Why do you think I call myself Peter Pan. Rumple replies don't think it's because you care for me . Pan says we can have a happy ending be together just like you wanted. Rumple replies I will just not with you. Pan then traps Rumple in the box.
Daniella chapter 4 . 8/16/2014
The group return with a plan to get home. Emma , Gwen and morgana go to give Henery a message so he doesnt lose and Oliver go to get some wood. Oliver confronts Arthur how long can you keep this up. Arthur as long as it takes to get Henery back. Arthur collapse. Oliver tells Arthur about the cure that without he die but with it he never leave the island. Arthur agrees and takes he is cured.

Meanwhile Emma , Gwen and Morgana try to talk to a lost boy with Pan to get a message to Henery. He rufues. So emma holds Gwen. So Morgana can rip out his heart to use to control him. She gives him a piece of mirror and they have the other. The boy says to Henery I have a message for you.

He sees the mirror. He says Mum , Gwen. Emma says it's us it's operation cobra we coming to get you. Henry says he has to go someone is coming. Morgana says we love you.
Daniella chapter 4 . 8/16/2014
The group decide to look for the Emma and the lost boys camp for ideas to get home as it been a while so they can't remember. They find Tinki old place. Emma says what does this remind me of. Arthur says it's so bear. Emma says that's it my old place. Gwen says because it wasn't home just a place to sleep. Emma looks shocked. Gwen says Emma don't look so shocked before I lived in my house and the palace. I moved from place to place.

They find Emma and the lost boys old place. They find a connut with a hole in it. Gwen says maybe it's a tiny conloder. Morgana replies yes because pre teen Bailfire made lots of pasta. Emma lights the conunut and closes it. She says look there conduntes a way home. Which emma and the lost boys know as Bae taught them.
Daniella chapter 4 . 8/16/2014
Also now with a map the group decide to think of a plan how to resue Henry and get off the island. They realise no one has left the island with out Pan allowing it. Also they have no idea what Pan wants with Henery. Tristan suggestions that they find Tinkibell a lost fairy who used to live here. She helped them once before.

They going looking for Tinki but Morgana gets separated from the group. It is Tinki that has her. Turns out Tinki used all the fairy dust to find Morgana a soul mate. The man with the lion tatoo. Morgana never went in. It cost Tinki her wings.

Tinki says to Morgana remember me ? Morgana replies Tinki you don't look so good. Tinki replies Are you trying to piss me off. Morgana replies They took your wings didn't they? Tinki replies you didn't just ruin your life you ruined my. You never went in. It the only thing that makes sense. Morgana replies you're right I never went in. Tinki replies why couldn't you just go in and be happy. Was being happy such a terrible fate. Morgana replies yes it was. You said I could let all that anger go. It just felt without that anger I would float away. What would I be without that anger. Tinki replies happy. Morgana replies weak.

Tinki now has a posion arrow to Morganas neck. Morgana says dont let the posion kill me you do it . She rips out her own heart. Gives it to Tinki. Tinki says to Morgana so far you haven't gave me one good reason why I shouldn't crush it. Morgana says look at it black heart dark heart. You're looking at your future. Now be the fairy I know you are. Tinki gives Morgana her heart back and walks away.

Soon the rest of the group reunites. Emma and the lost boys reunites with Tinki as they know her as kids in never land. They fill Tinki in she agrees to help.

The group talk about how to resue Henry. But Tinki refuses to help with out a exist plan.
Emma replies she right she should know better Neal taught you never break into a place unless you know the way out.
Daniella chapter 4 . 8/15/2014
Sorry were was I accidentally posted before I frinshed.

Win. Emma replies because I am the savior because if that were true this map would have already shown us the way. Gwen replies maybe who you think you are isn't who you really are. Sometimes we have to look deeper to find who you really are. You stopped. That boy. Why did you stop?

Because he was just a boy Emma replies. No I saw it in your eyes something more Gwen replies. Emma replies because his eyes when I looked in his eyes. I saw me. Just a little girl that thought she didn't matter that thought she never would. Who cried herself to sleep at night because she wanted her parents so bad and could never understand why they gave her up. It's just this island I don't feel like a hero like a saviour. I just feel like what I always been a orphan.

Gwen replies then you found us but it was too late. Then Emma look the map worked. Emma then says I am sorry. Gwen replies It's ok you were an orphan its my job to change that.

Frinsh.
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