Ooh, I absolutely loved this! Your writing is brilliant! I know I'm eons late to this story, but I'm so glad I found it. Your use of suspense, the build up, Charlie's hidden power, even his surprise great uncle were wonderful plot points, and I'm so happy that i had a chance to read this. Even your characterisation was on point! Thanks for sharing your writing with us lesser mortals!

A-M-A-Z-I-N-G!

Loved the beginning but admit I found the end very confusing

Interesting if a tad confusing

And onto the next chapter with wonder

So far so good

It's so sweet

I don’t know how to feel about this story. A lot of things were left unanswered and blank, the chapters were super short and the story felt rushed. I mean by the end they’d been living together for like a month and they were engaged and saying I love you ? I don’t know, even in the magical world of Harry Potter, it doesn’t seem plausible. But I commend you on finishing this story and having fun writing it.

Thank you for sharing this

This was a pretty good story. You're pretty good at writing.

Bit of a rushed ending ruined a good story :(

amazing! just kind of wish there was an epilogue

*giggles* well then this gonna be awesome

WOHHOOOO, way to go, Charles! Boys, take notes.

What's wrong with her parents? She's a freaking war hero! Ugh! Can't wait to see what Charlie is going to do!