Even after so many years I still love coming back to read this story

One of the best sotries I've read! Will you ever continue it?

Please update this

Please update this

Wish the lemon with Akasha and Naruto was longer

Will be interesting to see how they share Naruto

Loved this chapter

Amazing chapter

Like the story so far

Akasha's reasoning for accepting Moka into a harem setting was very believable, a mixture of wanting the one other person she loves as much as Naruto to be happy and suppressing her own selfishness in favor of her maternal instincts mixed with the simple fact that multiple lovers is common for powerful Yokai males as it would make sense for multiple reasons.

As for the lemons or what is appropriate. Its iffy, from a writer standpoint there is nothing wrong with getting heavily detailed, many other authors do and paranormal romance authors get downright raunchy. But from the site point of view its more iffy, fanfic's 'administrators' are actually volunteers like Facebook chat groups, not actual employees. A few years ago they had this 'Purge' where they said they were targeting stories with 'illicit content' (including lemons), in reality though it was a very bias purging as the admins used it as an excuse to purge romances of pairings they personally didn't like (NaruHina suffered a BIG purging as opposed to other Naruto pairings) or make a political statement (none of the yaoi stories were purged and they were most definitely FAR more vulgar. They even purged innocent stories such as a Naruto-Kushina mother-son relationship story to the song of 2Pac's 'Dear Momma'). So the admins are very bias, really if they want, they'll purge this story just for a small lime if they don't like it (arrogant bastards). They can do the same with reviews and even shut down your account, hence why I do my reviews as 'guest', worse they can do is delete my review and not an account.

Oh and love the 'Garage' idea, I hate stories where Naruto thinks cars are stupid because he can run faster than them, yeah, I'm sure he can, but two words 'Chakra Exhaustion', I'm pretty sure a ninja would be like 'sweeeeet! I don't have to waste my chakra running!' if they saw a car.

So far I think this story is good, except for one fact, regular vampires aren't as powerful as high-tier ninja, and trust me, I DO NOT say that lightly, in most crossovers (cough* fairy tail dragon king cough*) I would usually throw a fit about Naruto being depicted as too powerful, but in truth, the Rosario Vampire world would not hold a candle to Naruto's world, even Post-Timeskip Sakura is as powerful as Moka Akashiya who IS a Shinso, so if Sakura is that powerful, it stands to reason Naruto at full-power would annihilate the Dark Lords and Alucard at the same time, the Jubi only seems weaker because it was battling an army of trained warriors, but keep in mind Jubi's bijudama did annihilate an entire village in the blink of an eye, Alucard isn't that powerful, especially since his power actually relies on eating something, not blasting it to smithereens.

However, I could see Sasuke overwhelmed and killed by fifty vampires, and not because I hate Sasuke, but because in your story, by this point hes only got his Sharingan, Post-Timeskip Sasuke would utterly decimate the Bloodriver house and trust me, that's not something I like to admit, Hell, PT Sasuke could kill Issa, and that's one bad-ass motherfucker, he beat the entire Vampire race into submission. So the idea of a Sage Naruto dying so easily at the hands of Akasha's father is a bit too unrealistic, I see where this is going, but still a little hard to believe.

I would have liked to see Hana get turned into a Hanyo concubine, I'm not big on the sole NaruHana pairing, but I like her in a harem setting, and there's tons of possibilities turning her into a half-breed, she could become a Werewolf or an Inugami, either or would be interesting (See Inukami! anime for the latter).

On a side-note, I REALLY like your portrayal of Naruto, it's one of the best I've ever seen, he's still vulnerable because he did suffer the village's hate (his fear of losing Akasha's friendship makes him very easy to see as a real person), but coming back calm and cool for his graduation, not arrogant and cocky, and not smitten with any girl who gives him attention, but calm and collected made him awesome, reminds me of Natsu Dragneel and Ichigo Kurosaki towards the end of their series.

good story

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Just thought of this fic for some reason. I read it years and years ago (published 2011, last update 2012, it's certainly been a while) but it's been one of my absolute favorites. I'm sure you get a lot of comments like that but I, for some reason, really enjoy reading a lot of fanfiction - and have for a decade now (not something I'd brag about in public hah). Still, keeping in mind all the thousands upon thousands of stories I've read throughout the years, this one still makes my top 5.

Real books are sometimes so good they have a 're-readability' to them, but only a select elite of fanfiction stories can say they do as well. I have read this story multiple times, the pacing is overall good (although I feel the "things turning bad" part happens very abruptly. Trying not to spoil anything here: When Naruto wakes up to what's going on in that scene, it's like the closing of a chapter. And as the things happens to Sasuke and Akasha it feels, as I said, very sudden.)

I enjoyed the humour, I can at least say that I did at the time hah. Well-written romance and you also handled it in a more realistic manner than any other crossover than I had seen at the time. Not only did one party simply not fall head over heels for the other, instantly. Once "the thing happened", Akasha moved on - which was explained in a very mature and realistic way.

I enjoyed scenes with Kuyo, the scenes with Omote or Inner Moka, I liked how you started to cut Sasuke some slack towards the end.

Thank you for the story,
xoxo

Wow... such a good story till this chapter. No way it takes 500 years to find her

Good stuff, though I feel he was way too lenient on tsu all things considered. He specifically said that he only didn’t kill him the first time as a favour, so when he does something almost as bad wouldn’t that same punishment be expected?
Anyway, if you’re gonna abandon a story, at least through something in the description. On a cliffhanger no less!