Really? You need a lot of work in this story. One vampires are strong and tough not speedy. Naruto would crush most of the monsters in that world. Yet you have him following the path that weak butt hole human guy in the story. Yet he is strong but still weak. Trying reading your story chapter after you write it.

You made Naruto a bitch in this who tends to be overdramatic. Why the rasenshuriken? Nerfing his sharingan abilities is something that annoys me a lot. If he's going to have a sharingan weaker than even Kakashi who is a non uchiha with only one sharingan, you night as well not even give him the sharingan, rather just give him the ability to cast powerful illusions with eye contact. He's too accepting of everything that comes his way, accepting to be a spy just like that? If he even accepts, he should have conditions of his own. If Naruto was in the dragon ball world where basically every problem is solved with brute strength, he can be allowed to be dense but as a shinobi from a world with manipulative enemies who only show themselves when absolutely necessary or at the peak of their plans, it will certainly bite him in the ass too many times for his own good. You're just making a slightly mature canon Naruto

Actually, Naruto's first and second kiss was Sasuke.

Annoying dense blushing idiot naruto. Fucking author thinks it’s so cool making a dumb stupid bitch boy naruto
Who blushes every 5 fucking seconds around an attractive women and completely dense. Dropped it just for this. So annoying

The pairing with Moka is not possible if you don’t address the issue of her lifespan because Vampires are eternal, and the reason that Tsukune ended as a Shinso.

Tsukune is starting to annoy me because it is better to let go of his feelings since he is a worthless character during the first season, and even to a part of the second season.

The Hiraishin is not a jutsu that can be mastered in a day it is impossible for Naruto to master it.

This legendary technique requires sealing mastery if you read the canon of Naruto this should be known.

The creation of the technique was a result of Minato tryin’ to surpass the second Hokage’s similar skill.

The technique is derived from sealing mastery in fact it takes years unless Naruto is trained by a Seal master.

It is a Time and space Jutsu requiring complex sealing techniques.

The dense trait of Naruto is coming out to really hurt him, and it is evident in the canon.

Tsukune shouldn’t be envious because Kurumu is easily one of the sexiest girls in the series with a wonderful personality to boot.

The removal of the Rosario is very important in the canon it means that Naruto is the destined soulmate of Moka since the condition of the release lies in your true love helping Moka.

Moka presents a serious challenge in terms of a pairing because of her Vampire lineage since they don’t age at all.

The question is what to do with Outer Moka who is actually the mother of Moka who simply sealed herself in the a Rosario to protect her daughter but to prevent Alucard from destroying the world.

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The fuck man?! U disappoint me to no Fucking end knowing that u abandoned this story I Fucking hate when people do that shit! It’s so Fucking annoying and here I thought I was gonna favorite this story and give it a five out of five stars but I guess I was wrong to even think that those who abandoned there story after 2-6 chapters are pathetic enough as it is for not even trying
But those who abandoned the story after its 34th chapter is just Fucking sad and is a big disappointment to us as a reader hell its a disappointment to the community to know that ur abandoning it for something so relatively dumb might I add it’s pathetic for u to do that just because u didn’t feel like looking at the same Fucking plot ! And u call urself a writer?! U disappoint me and everyone else here it is selfish of what u did but ya know something maybe if this was brought back where it left off as like a second season of it . Then my respons won’t be as harsh but this is truly pathetic and since it was abandoned mid way it can’t even be called a fandom. No fandoms are ever Fucking abandoned mid way for someone’s own selfish reasons who gives a damn if ur tired of looking at the same plot u made the damn story so now u have to Fucking put up with the plot that u Fucking made !

Why did he just use the rasenshuriken? It would of gotten the battle done as prob the Amataratsu